ROFL XD this is so funnny Report Review
it's a good try. I like the plot and all, but you have a bunch of run-on type sentances, no punctuation, some spelling mistakes, etc. You may want to get a betta to read over your story and fix it up. Lovely idea tho. julzAuthor's Response: thanx 4 the comment. sorry i didnt respond sooner. Report Review
It's funny and it does remind me of some of our family christmas mishaps, and it is totally believeable. I loved it thanks for making my day! icecrystalAuthor's Response: Ty glad u liked it coz it was me first story but it isnt finished it yet lol Report Review
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