WO! SIRIUS BLACK MAKES A COMEBACK! AND I'M DEAD SIRIUS THIS TIME! (Oh wow, that's such a pun) Report Review
SIRIUS IS ALIVE?!??! If you don't update soon I just might explode. Hurry! Report Review
Can't wait to hear how Sirius came back. Good reading, I look forward to more. Report Review
He's back! Harry's gonna flip when he sees Sirius again! Excellent job with this, please update real soon! Report Review
How did he return? Yup, you guessed it, I'm anxious to see how Sirius returned. Also, what's up with Charlie? Can't wait to see what he does as well.
You had a few mistakes here and there, nothing big.
Great job, though! Report Review
Nice start! Began with happiness and cheer, then changed to mystery and darkness. Definately got me hooked and wanting to read more. And that's just what I plan to do! Report Review
Nice story! Love it :D
I definitely like your way of writing, it's very interesting, although in chapter 2 you as a writer became 'visible'. You said 'I' while describing something - I don't know if that was intentionally; personally I'm not a fan of the writer becoming visible only on rare occasions. I think that's the only negative thing I've got to say though :)
Keep it up, and I hope we get more info about Sirius' mysterious appearance :) Report Review
Ooh keep writing I want to see the confrontation between Harry and Sirius!! Also i wonder if harry is okay now that it is all over and that he has lost so much? Report Review
awesome sirius is back, cant wait to see where this goes, whens the next chapter?! Report Review
I really liked this chapter. I think Sirius got back, for he went through the veil with his whole body. The whys, Bella is dead, and perhaps she didn't fully mean the Killing curse. I can't wait till Harry meets up with Sirius. Hooray!Author's Response: I'm glad you like it but you will have to wait until the next chapter to find out if your correct. I hope to have it up by the end of the week.
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Oh yes, I want to read more. I love how while the WW celebrates our heroes are asleep. What a cliffhanger you've left us with, my my. Who was that mysterious man, who crawled from the Department of Mysteries. What does he mean to the Wizarding World? I do hope you have the next chapter ready for queue.Author's Response: Thank you very much. I will have the next chapter in the queue by the end of the week. Glad you liked it so far. The chapters will get longer. I promis. Thank you for reviewing
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what a good first chapter! I cant wait to read more.
Keep it up ^^Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed the first chapter. You shouldn't have to wait too long for the next part. Thank you for reviewing
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