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Review #1, by the0giant0squid Two unimportant people

15th January 2009:
Beautiful. Just beautiful.
It's a bit confusing with all the random scenes, but otherwise amazing.

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Review #2, by Spinners Beginning Two unimportant people

3rd December 2008:
Wow! I loved it. It was very emotional and heartfelt. The only mistake I could find was that in this sentence you added an extra quotation mark after the word it.

“Can you believe it?” All that effort only to catch that little ball.”

My favorite part was the ending! Yep, definately love the ending. Well, got to go. Kudos!

Author's Response: Thanks, it means a lot to me that you liked the story!

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