Nice story. Enjoyed a non-HHr-centered story (although they're still my favorite couple and I would love to read more about them from you). Report Review
Interesting back story on the portraits. Report Review
The only part I probably wasn't fond of the was the visit to the Potions Lab. But other than that, it was a good read. The proposal scene was sweet, although I still like the Godparents' proposal scene better. It seemed more natural. Report Review
THis was the most hee-larious story ever! Report Review
Great finish for this story! Report Review
i likeed it very much. short and it helped alot Report Review
Really enjoyed this story. I especially liked Hermione's memory of FredAuthor's Response: There were a couple of memories that would have taken the story out of the pg-13 realm that popped to mind, but I thought the idea of a 13 year old Hermione putting Fred through the wringer like that was pretty good.
Thanks and I'm glad you enjoyed it. Report Review
Awsome chapter, I really enjoyed it. Love the story.Author's Response: thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it. The closing took more time than the rest of it, there was so many things, I was trying to find what would convey what was going on without overwhelming the rest of the story.
So cool! I always wondered how that magic worked!Author's Response: Well, at least that's how I think it works. The portraits are an interesting device she came up with, and there does seem to be two levels of them, the Sir Cadogan and others around the castle, and then the more connected ones like the Headmasters/mistresses and some of the others. Report Review
Excellent having Harry hiding under the cloak. I like Ginny and Seamus together.Author's Response: I'm still trying to figure out exactly who Ginny does well with. No offense to anyone, but I'm not a very big D/G fan, and Asteria is very adamant that they are very happy together, so who am I to argue?
It was one of those things that happened as I was writing the scene. I wondered where Harry was while all of this was going on and then I noticed him standing there underneath the cloak Report Review
Very interesting start, you've got me hooked. I'm looking forward to the next chapter...Author's Response: Good to hear, I'm glad you liked it so far. Hopefully you'll enjoy the rest of this tale Report Review
Awsome chapter, I really like the story so far. Can't wait for the next chapterAuthor's Response: Thanks. The next chapter is coming along, it's a bit longer so it will be out as soon as I get it reread and edited. Report Review
Very good chapter, really enjoyed it. You suprised me when Harry appeared form under his cloak. Love the story so far.Author's Response: thanks, I'm glad you like the story so far. Him being there was sort of the 'slytherin Harry' coming out in that he trusted Hermione enough to lead the conversation, but he could be there himself to gauge their reactions without him influencing them. Sort of a 'good cop - invisible cop' routine. Report Review
Hmmm, this seems to be very interesting. I shall now read the next chapter. I like it.Author's Response: I'm glad you find it interesting and hope you like the rest of the story.
Very nice story. I bet its even more interesting in the next chapters :)
The characters are built so normal. Seamus is awsome and I guess you give him the active role that he needed but rowling didn't manage to give him in the books. Congratulations and
Keep it up :DAuthor's Response: I always felt he was a bit underwritten. The only time he's really in focus is when he's thinking Harry's a nutter, for the most part.
I'm glad you like the story, and I hope you like the rest of it. Thanks for leaving a review, I appreciate it Report Review
This is very sweet. :) Will you have a chapter about the wake?Author's Response: I'm glad you like this little story so far. The wake will be chapter 3. There's still a bit of business to take care of in the corridor for Hermione. Report Review
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