I love the mistletoe tidbit. I think it's very sweet. I forgot to mention this earlier, but I really love that the little boy is named Harry. Foreshadowing! And an explanation, though sometimes names cannot have an explanation. This is beautiful, amazing, unique, spectacular, and I think it's sheer genius.
Bravo!Author's Response: Thank you! Well, I like to think that there always is something to a name, but of course it doesn't have to be the case. Thank you for taking the time with another one of my stories! Report Review
It's got a gentle, calm air with a simple style. I really, really love it. It's beautiful.Author's Response: Again, exactly what I tried to do! Thank you! Report Review
How very interesting. It's unique, an interesting idea, and shows both James and Lily in different lights. It's really cool.
Bravo.Author's Response: It's exactly what I tried to show with this, I'm glad you found it so. Thanks for the review! Report Review
That was such a good story! I was tearing with anticipation and joy!!! It was beautiful and informative and romantic and adorable!!! I think it is by far the nest piece of writing that I have ever read in my entire 15 years of life! Amazing. You definitely have great stories because i just finished reading them all. I don't mean to come on too strong but i have read alot of fanfiction and am rarely that impressed. Hope to read more stories!!!Author's Response: Thanks very much for that review! I'm glad you caught the exact emotions I tried to get out when writing this. And I'm even more glad that you've read all of my stories. Thanks a lot! I'm glad I can keep you entertained! Thanks for the review again! Report Review
Aw so cute...yet so sad poor Harry!! But still i got all giggly at the mistletoe part haha i think i still am a little giggly it was so sweet I usually just like the shorter stories but i think that you would have been able to go farther with this one...its amazing either way lol!! You're a fantastic author i've read almost all of your stories (just the ones with lily and james)!! heehee they're great!!Author's Response: Haha, thanks! Yea, I probably could, but I have the opinion, that a story has to end while it's at the top. Just because it's good doesn't mean one have to continue, because eventually it's going down again.
It's nice to hear! Thanks a lot for the review and reading my stories!! Report Review
o! It was amazing! It is such a cute story!Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked it! Report Review
me thinks it was pretty cool! (Y) but I got confused with the characters like, who's Tom and Brigitte,etc? I mean, i got Sirius and James and Lily... But why's Harry in it aswell?D;
Aside from all that; I found it splendidly wonderful! :DAuthor's Response: Thanks! Well, it's just random children at the orphanage, and our Harry Potter is named after the Harry at the orphanage.
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i think its simply superb.
i read the last review and i cudnt disagree with that more...
i love ur story.and even if there are any errors (i never noticed any) one can not overlook the beautiful feeling this simple stry is conveying...
i really liked ur response to that review...
and as far as ur story is concerned.i simply loved it.
my frnd read it earlier and left a reviw too...she only suggested me to read...and i m glad i did...
i wish u'll continue it.or write another one...
u really make the readers feel wat u want them to...
keep on writing
simply.loveAuthor's Response: Thanks a lot for the support for the previous, it means a lot to me that you don't feel the same way, and you're totally right. This story isn't about grammer and spelling, but about the spirit, which was what I focused on when writing it. And I'm so happy to hear I actually did succeed in making you feel a little of what I did when writing this.
Well, thanks to your friend too! Haha. I feel honoured she recommended you to read it.
(If you're looking for another Christmas story, even though it's a little late now, I have one on VTM called Winter Warmth if you're interested. It's a SB/OC, and also in three chapters.)
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I wish that I could tell you this was a nice story but that's not possible considering I can't read it. The amount of grammatical errors is absurd.Author's Response: Wow I feel I owe you an apology. Or more.
First I'm sorry that I do not speak English as native language, and therefore can't make anything as perfect as any American or Englishman.
Then I'm sorry that I wrote this more than one and a half year ago, and my writing skills were not nearly as good as they are today.
And I'm sorry that we all can't be perfect, as I'm sure you are.
And I'm sorry you had to waste 15 minutes of your life, reading my story.
And I'm sorry you had to go down to such a level where you had to exaggerate more than necessarily (it's not perfect, but not unreadable either).
But most of all I'm sorry that, apparently, my writing was so absurdly awful that you got so frustrated you couldn't even take time, pointing out some of the mistakes I've made, so I could have them fixed.
Hope you accept my sincere apologies,
Merry Christmas! Report Review
awsum !awsum !awsum ! waiting eagerly for the next chapter!Author's Response: But it's finished! :( I'm glad you liked it, but unfortunately untrusted authors can't change anything about their stories, so I can't even go from WIP till completed. Thanks for your review! Report Review
Awww... the scene with Anna was really sweet. Making James admit his feelings for Lily was very good. And I like that you described James as "not like that" when it came to kissing Lily under the mistletoe.
I look forward to the next chapter!
10/10Author's Response: Thanks a lot!! Anna is actually a read person, i love her :P haha, and well, who wants to have your first kiss to be something you have to? Not James I guess, it'd be different if Lily wanted too. ;)
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Thank you for writing a Christmas story! I've been looking around and not really finding any, so thanks!
I'll leave a longer review next chapter ...
-LilyAuthor's Response: I know what you're talking about! I did the same last year, so instead I wrote one myself! Haha. I actually have one more, but there's no time to get it up. Thanks for your review! Report Review
i love it. it is so cute and sweet. is there gonna be another chapter?Author's Response: Yeah, I have one more chapter, it's sent to validation ;) Thanks for your review! Report Review
This is SUPER cute. Please continue. :)Author's Response: Thanks, and I sure intend to :P Report Review
oh yay! James being a noble gentlemen!! i love him when he's like that...
i love your story! please update soon!Author's Response: Thanks a lot! Well, there's no Snape around and no friends to make him act foolish, so of course he's going to be the sweet guy :P Report Review
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