Reading Reviews for Beyond The Archway
6 Reviews Found

Review #1, by The Empress The Old Woman

28th January 2009:
Lols, this was great. I loved this chapter. Very fun.

Author's Response: Glad to liked it!! I will get back to writing this when I have more time, I'm crazy busy with my course at the moment, exams coming up. Thanks for reviewing!!

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Review #2, by cupidstunt The Old Woman

18th January 2009:
Wow, I'm still enjoying this and can't wait for the next chapter to be posted, or sent to me as I offered to beta.

Author's Response: I havn't been able to write anything else as I have been super busy, and this chapter had already been posted before you offered to beta. Once I have the next chapter written I will send it to you =) if you still want to that is!! Thanks for the review as well =)

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Review #3, by Estellaa Remembering Sirius

16th December 2008:
i'm quite confused, you skip to too many different characters, whos Ally? very confused.

Author's Response: Albus. Prefer it to All. Will get simpler later, its tricky with so many characters.

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Review #4, by cupidstunt Return to Hogwarts

13th December 2008:
Okay, just email it to cupidstunt[at] and i'll give it a look over.

Replace the [at] with an @, because you can't put email addresses in reviews

Author's Response: Thanks!! Will email you chapter four when I have it ready =D

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Review #5, by cupidstunt Remembering Sirius

11th December 2008:
Though you've only written two chapters, I'm intrigued by your story and am enjoying it.
Do you need anyone to proof-read it? I'd be more than willing to. Your grammar is generally good, but you have a few typo's and misspellings.
I'm looking forward to see where this goes.

Author's Response: Wow!! I'm pretty new to this, so I'm not sure how to go about it, but it would be great if you would proof read =) Thankyou very much!!

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Review #6, by The Empress Remembering Sirius

11th December 2008:
Wow, this sounds really interesting! I like what you've got, can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: My first ever review!! Yay!! Thank you, I'm glad you like it, there will be lots more revealed in the next chapter, I hope you keep reading!! Thanks again for reviewing =)

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