Lols, this was great. I loved this chapter. Very fun.Author's Response: Glad to liked it!! I will get back to writing this when I have more time, I'm crazy busy with my course at the moment, exams coming up. Thanks for reviewing!! Report Review
Wow, I'm still enjoying this and can't wait for the next chapter to be posted, or sent to me as I offered to beta.Author's Response: I havn't been able to write anything else as I have been super busy, and this chapter had already been posted before you offered to beta. Once I have the next chapter written I will send it to you =) if you still want to that is!! Thanks for the review as well =) Report Review
i'm quite confused, you skip to too many different characters, whos Ally? very confused.Author's Response: Albus. Prefer it to All. Will get simpler later, its tricky with so many characters. Report Review
Okay, just email it to cupidstunt[at]live.co.uk and i'll give it a look over.
Replace the [at] with an @, because you can't put email addresses in reviewsAuthor's Response: Thanks!! Will email you chapter four when I have it ready =D Report Review
Though you've only written two chapters, I'm intrigued by your story and am enjoying it.
Do you need anyone to proof-read it? I'd be more than willing to. Your grammar is generally good, but you have a few typo's and misspellings.
I'm looking forward to see where this goes.
Favourited.Author's Response: Wow!! I'm pretty new to this, so I'm not sure how to go about it, but it would be great if you would proof read =) Thankyou very much!! Report Review
Wow, this sounds really interesting! I like what you've got, can't wait to read more!Author's Response: My first ever review!! Yay!! Thank you, I'm glad you like it, there will be lots more revealed in the next chapter, I hope you keep reading!! Thanks again for reviewing =)
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