Uh, 'Eqauilibrium' is actual spelt 'Equilibrium.'
Just thought I'd give you a heads up.
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oh my god ron is such a grouch his head is way to far up his own ass please write more tho i love the story you are such a great writer

Author's Response: my new chapter should be up in a couple of days just keep checking and don\\\'t worry the chapter after won\\\'t be to far behind. Thank you for reviewing :)


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do you mind telling us whose P.O.V. it is im kinda having trouble deciphering the story since i dont know who point of view it is other than that good story

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I like this.I found it looking for Rose/Scorpius.I like the fact she sat in his lap despite the death glares they got.I'd like to see more of them please.

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please write more i love this story so much please

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please pleasewrite more i finally got in to it and i just need to read more

Author's Response: the story should be updated soon. sorry about that school and writers block but i did update yesterday.

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omg this story is really good and u really need 2 update soon!!

Author's Response: the story should be updated soon. sorry about that school and writers block but i did update yesterday. so you can read up as soon as its posted.

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Hey! I'm really sorry, but you keep on making the mistake of calling the wizard-police autors, and they're really aurors. I'd really appreciate it if you put that in instead of autors, and I'm sure other readers would, too.

Author's Response: Omg thanks for telling me i just realized that i'm going to change it as soon as possible thanks again.

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Pretty good. A little confusing, but otherwise good. I think that if you write more chapters, (hint, hint=P) you will get more feedback! 8/10

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