i love it. seriously its awsome Report Review
Hehehe! I'd kill Oliver, or hit him over the head with a bat, sure! :)
You're a really talented writer. And I was thinking, maybe you could do a sequel to Daddy Dearest? Cause I really REALLY loved that story! Report Review
Aww harsh he broke up with her ! Lol but I really liked it, it was hilarious. "All is fair in love and quidditch" - my favourite part. Great job anyway ! Report Review
That was really funny!! Oliver deserved it, lol! Report Review
I loved it!!! My mom keeps giving me weird looks because I was cracking up so much in the end..Author's Response: Hahaha, wow! Well I'm really glad you liked it so much! :D Don't worry, I get those looks from my mom all the time. I'm glad you thought it was funny. Thank you for the great review! Report Review
I got so excited once I figured out what this story was about. Clues. Scavenger hunts. You don't understand how much I love them. They defined such a big part of my childhood. And teenagehood. Yeah... I never really grew up.
I don't know what I was expecting at the end. But certainly not Oliver dumping her! But, you know what? Even though it was really cruel. It was such a good twist. And I absolutely loved it.Author's Response: Growing up is overrated. Psh. I'm a teenager right now, 16, and I still love scavenger hunts. I'm glad that that attracted you to this story...because honestly, this is probably my least favorite story that I've written on my account.
Haha, yeah, alot of people seem shocked by that. Cruel is the right word for it. I'm glad you liked the twist though! :) Thank you for another incredible review! Report Review
This is so funny! I love this, and I think Oliver's a nasty bastard in this, but oh well :)Author's Response: Haha, yay! I'm funny. :P Oliver is a bit of a nasty jerk in this one, I agree, but I wanted to make it a bit different from all the other Oliver/OC stories out there. Thanks for the compliments and the reviews! Report Review
That was brilliant. I know Oliver was kind of obsessed with Quiddich and all, but I never would have put him down for that much of a bastard. Very good story, well written.Author's Response: Haha, thank you very much! :) I actually did this one-shot for a challenge, although the issuer of the challenge never responded to my pm, so whatever. I was given the pairing and that I was supposed to break them up somehow, so I decided to be creative. :P I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for reviewing! Report Review
revenge is sweet!!!
ollies a jerk!!!
i love this fanfic!!!
seiuosly, nice job.
-cocoAuthor's Response: Haha, thanks! I'm glad you like it! Oliver is a jerk! :) Thanks for reviewing! Report Review
Loved it! Haha I love her for getting revenge!!!Author's Response: Haha! Yep, she definatley deserved to get it! I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for reviewing! Report Review
hah that was hilarious and i loved it :)Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it! :) Report Review
Ouch! Jesus Christ that's got to hurt...Author's Response: Hehe, yeah. I imagine that would hurt pretty badly. But ya know, 'hell hath no fury like a woman scorned'. :P Report Review
"Pumpkin pie tasted foul"
BLASPHEMY, I TELL YOU.
Actually, pretty good storry overall. nice plot idea!Author's Response: Ugh. I really can't stand pumpkin pie. I know everyone likes it, but I really hate it. :P Sorry. I don't know what it is. There's probably something wrong with me... :P
I'm glad you liked my story regardless of Julie's and my dislike for that. Thanks for reviewing! :) Report Review
:) This is super funny, well except for the Oliver dumping her through that...but her getting the Beater's bat and hitting him, it was hilarious. Revenge is sweet. I also liked how you used the quote, 'All is fair in love and Quidditch.'Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it and thought it was funny. :) 'All is fair in love and quidditch' is my favorite part too. I don't even remember how I came up with it. :P Thanks for reviewing! Report Review
Ha ha, I loved this! It was hilarious. I kinda wasn't expecting him to break up with her, a little bit harsh. But it was pretty funny. I liked the ending, I probably would've done the same thing!Author's Response: Haha. Thanks! I'm glad you liked it and thought it was funny. I have to admit, that if I was dumped like that, I would have totally hit him too. :P Report Review
WOW! that was super good. and super funny. i wish it wasnt just a oneshot, i think it could work as more.Author's Response: Hehe, thanks! Unfortunately, I don't think I'm going to make this into anything more than just this one shot - I already have way too many things to work on and to be honest, this is all the inspiration I have for this story. Thanks for reviewing! I'm glad you liked it! :) Report Review
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