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Review #1, by AddysenMalfoy Tom

28th November 2008:
Good start. It is a wee bit to vague and jumpy for my total liking, but that may be the point, building mystery and all. Definitely continue with it, it has so much potential.

Just some advice might be to have longer chapters to keep the audience emerced longer and more intrigued when it ends. Yet this may be your prologue to it all so what do I know.

Thank you for also reading my story 'Dark Intentions'. I hope you enjoyed it!

Cheers Hun,


Author's Response: Thank you so much :}
I haven't written before, so I'm working on it. I will definitely make them longer and more specific, thank you for the advice.

Update soon, I have been dying to know what happens!

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Review #2, by HuFfLePuFf Tom

27th November 2008:
Awesome story and please update as you can!!!

Author's Response: Oh, thank you :}
I am brand-new, so I appreciate the reading and responding. It's a grand self-esteem boost. For awhile, I thought I was writing all alone on the big internet, and no one was reading. So thank you, thank you!

There's a new chapter waiting for validation, it should be up soon.

Love, Stella

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