This story is unbelieveably awesome I do hope you continue you have a real talent for writing have a good day :]
10/10

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Love the beginning and this pairing is absolutely adorable :] 10/10

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i luved it write some more chapters please.

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i love the banner for this chapter. SKANDAR LOOKS SMEXY!! love your story as well. why aren't you updating?

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Beautiful, keep going - I love the way you write. It's so poetic and lovely, its like water - it flows perfectly together! = )

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This was excellent!!! I love the way you portray edmund and hermione's relationship.They are perfect for each other.

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Please finish it its good

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Heya! I just popped back in to reread this awesome fic!!! I'm just wondering, did you abandon it??? If you did, I beg of you to continue! This is so good!!! Well done! It's still just as good as the first time I read it!

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Aslan's words touch gently to the story. I love that line about Edmund's heart. I think it's going to be an amazing story; I'm starting to like this pairing.
Your writing is so smooth and filled with meaning. I absolutely love it!

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update? maybe? :]
I love you way you write Edmund. It's so sweet. 10/10
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Author's Response: Well, thank you. That's just kind of the way I interpretted how Ed would act if he was in a relationship in the Narnia books.

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BritishBoysLover

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Wow, this is so good. 10/10
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Author's Response: You sound shocked. Haha.

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BritishBoysLover

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Oh that was so good!!!I loved it!

Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad to see that more people are interested in this site than I originally thought, and that those interested took the time to read this. Thanks for leaving a review.

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BritishBoysLover

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Oh i love it!!! So descriptive.

Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you noticed. I'm kind of a descriptive imagery freak, especially in this type of writing. Thanks for reviewing.

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BritishboysLover

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This is getting GOOD your such a good writing please keep writing!
10/10
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Author's Response: Thanks Olive! You're too sweet. :)

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BritishBoysLover

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amazing!
i love where your going w/ this story!!
please keep writing i read a comment you wrote someone, (that you might not finish it) oh please dont! it stoo good!
10/10

Author's Response: Well, thanks hun.
I'm honestly going to try, but we'll see what happens.

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BritishBoysLover

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this is soo sweet i really hope youll continue to more chapters please! you are really good in your writing!

Author's Response: Thanks and, as I stat, I'll try.

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BritishBoysLover

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wow not only do i love narnia but harry potter too.. u did a great job on this first chapter.. i love the pairing.. please keep writing this is good

Author's Response: Thanks melrose; your words are too kind.

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BritishBoysLover

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I really love this! this is definitely one of my favourite shippings! please keep up with the great work!!

>> Kyster

Author's Response: Me too kyster! I actually ship them on YouTube; haha.

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BritishBoysLover

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Is so beautiful.is kinda confuse some parts but Im sure I will get it lol...I completeley love it and will continue reading it...amazing the images beautiful and amazing the effecs and all the story is amazing IS SO COOL

Author's Response: Thanks hermione2411; you're too sweet as both a YT friend and story reviewer. :)

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BritishBoysLover

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oh my. you're desperate measures?!?!? you know what, i should thank you. you're the one who's got me craving for some good narnia hp crossover fanfics out there. really. and i find all your stories really good. and oh. hedmione love... :)

Author's Response: Hey pinefir.
Yep; I'm xDesperateMeasuresx.
Thanks for all you're praise on both YT anf on HPFF; you're words are so nice and as both a author, and vidder, you have no idea how much they mean to me.

Much love,
BritishBoysLover
(and xDesperateMeasuresx ;D)

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amazing it is so beutiful please continue, the way you describe the feelings of the characters it mkes u understand more and is beautiful please continue it

Author's Response: Thanks, babe. Your words mean a lot being that you are the girl who started my Edmund/Hermione shipping. :)

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BritishBoysLover


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very well written
its just so short :(
update soon!

Author's Response: Will do, or will try to. ;)

Much love,
BritishBoysLover

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Dude! That was flippin good! =)
I randomly decided to read it, and I love it! =)

Author's Response: Don't sound so shocked, hun. Occasionally, I don't write crap. haha. ;)

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BritishBoysLover

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I really like it! Keep going!

Author's Response: Chapter 1: Not Real is up already, dearie. Haha. Enjoy and thanks for the review.

Much love,
BritishBoysLover

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This story is good can you please write the next chapter

Author's Response: I'm trying. i haven't had time due to school. Also, i lost my inspiration at the limited response to the story. =(

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