nice story so far!!! its very catchy

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i would just like to tell the author that this was the first ever harry potter fan fiction i have read. i read it bout 4 or 3 years ago and i just re-read it and it's still fantastic!!! this story made me want to read more and have ever since. thank you for opening up a whole new avenue for my reading addiction!!!!

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This story has been awesome to read. I nearly cried my head of while I read the last chapter. It was so terrible and yet beutiful both in the same time and it was very emotional reading. And I asolutely LOVE it. I'll be sure to read this other fic and if it's half as good as this one it's fabulous!
It moved me, the last part of James life, when he begged that the person outside was Sirius and when he accepted that he was going to die, that Peter was the traitor and that he was never going to see any of his friends again. (i know that last part wasn't written but still...) and you have a huge talent making people cry, even when they know EXACTLY what's going to happen, and that's really impressive! I give you an 10 out of ten possible. Good luck with other fics in the future! Keep'em coming, skriv mer!
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Oh oh oh, I'm actually in pain. God it was awful. Not your story but the events. Oh god, this was so perfect and so good and so SAD. Lily saying I love you and James remembering the joy and Sirius knowing he'd betrayed Remus as well. It's just terrible, but brilliant, glorious and wonderful. Well done.

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Depressing but very very good. Tragic stories are the best ones

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Ohoh, empty places. That line is just so heartrending. I like how you've brought Aberfourth into it, I hope we get to hear more of him!

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omg, aberforth knows! he knows whats gonna happen! omg...this story rocks! =)p.s. Go Lupin! =)

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Omg, that's amazing. Simply amazing. Wonderful job hon!! I cried and got goosebumps and actually felt nauseous when you-know-who showed up. Fantastic work!

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Sheesh, I read this story from start to finish! At first I thought that this was going to be one of those happy-go-lucky stories w/ everyone err... happy. It got better and better as chapters were added! I got goose bumps during some parts, even though I already knew what was gonna happen (based on my natural assumptions from reading JKR's HP books). I also must admit that the last few chapters ALMOST had an effect on me. WAY TO GO ON CAPTIVATING YOUR READERS AND USING THE READERS' EMOTIONS TO HOOK THEM TO YOUR STORY!! Excellent! SUPERB!

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Wow, I couldn't stop reading your story, it was so captivating. I wish you had written about Sirius confronting Peter though :(

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Hey, it's me, the author. I haven't been on this site for months, and wow it's changed! Something about the new layout must have added all the /// marks- I'm sure they weren't there when I first submitted it! I'm sorry that they make the story hard to read. When I have the time I'll try to sort it out. Huge, huge thankyous to everyone who has submitted a review.

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Very good, but hard to read with all the //////. I like Aberforth at the end, the kind of person you hate, but the character you learn to listen to.

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Well done. It was a really good story and it made me cry. Sniff. I thought the bit with Sirius and him holding James was so sad. Sirius is my favourite character so i was in tears! Please write some more-Im off to read the "Last Marauder" now.

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OH MY GOD This is by far the best story on this site. I don't think JKR could have done a better job writing the beginning like this if she tried. I am in tears right now, and i will be for a long time... your story touched me so much, and i cant tell you how much it meant to me. You are an extraordinary writer... amazing... WONDERFUL.. never stop what your doing here, never quit writing, you have a gift that is beyond what many people on this site have... There is not words to describe how I feel. I dont know you, nor will I ever know you probably, hehe.. but I LOVE YOU!!! love always ShannonPotter

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i think ur reasons for snape turning spy for the order are extremly logical good thinking : )

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You are fantastic, you know that right? This is just breathtaking and mindblowing.

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YOU ARE AMAZING ,you made me cry it was a raining above my mothers computer I swear very few writers make me cry and your one of them !!! I'm writing a James/Lily fan fic to and I'm so very much derading the part when I have to kill and since I'm writing it from Lily POV its going to be terrible . Good luck with future fan fic your a great writer , if you want to email me my address is ad_@comcast.net by the way if I could see you I give a hug for writing such a great fic

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u r an awsome writer...and i keep on checking back to c if u've written something new! lol plz do keep up the writing, u are very imaginative and talented, and i am definitely looking forward to ur next story!

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definately one of the best fics i have ever read! :-P

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That was so cool. Poor Sirius indeed. Poor Remus too! Man ... I cant tell you how much I like your story! *sniff* Be back soon!

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That was such an amazing fanfic. I gotta admit i almost cried at the end it was so sad. Poor Sirius he's so broken now. I gonna read The Last Maraurader see if its as good as this one.

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i couldn't believe how good your story was!! it was totally believable (i think i just contradicted myself but anyway) and am waiting for your next published work. loved it heaps. you're a great writer and never stop, not only because of your talent but because i want to read it!!!!

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Oh my GOD, I just spent an hour and a half reading this entire story from start to finish. You are a truly gifted writer and I immensely enjoyed this spectacular story... I'm going to go read your other story now. =) Cheers!

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Wow, i loved your story. I actually cried when Sirius found James. I really enjoyed it, thanks very much for taking time to contribute to harry potter and providing entertainment for fans like me.

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I loved it- absolutely loved it! You're an amazing writer, as good as J.K. herself. Good on you, I was very into reading this. Thanks so much for giving me the opportunity. Brynna Kate

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