{reviewid: 2288057, reviewer: 'knightofthephoenix'}
22nd January 2010:
Absolutely wonderful story! You came up with a fresh and entertaining storyline and ran with it to the finish! You should be proud of your effort and, as a published author, I encourage you to continue with your writing! You have a real talent! Thanks for the ride! (P.S. I usually post my reviews under Aurorofthelight).
Author's Response: Thanks; always glad to see people are still enjoying it!
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{reviewid: 2214613, reviewer: 'potterprof'}
11th September 2009:
Great story! It was nice to see Harry play some Quiditch again and the auror plot was written very well.
Author's Response: Thanks, glad you enjoyed it.
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{reviewid: 2192228, reviewer: 'Xaerius%20Rader'}
13th August 2009:
Nastily Exhausting Review Drill = N.E.R.D good one! =P
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{reviewid: 2125962, reviewer: 'Rose%20Delacour'}
26th May 2009:
It's almost sad it's over. Thank you for writing this amazing story! I've enjoyed it so much!
Lots of Love,
Rose Delacour
infinity+10/10
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{reviewid: 2125770, reviewer: 'Harry%20and%20Ginny'}
26th May 2009:
wow! this chapter is great. are u making a sequel but with Harry and Ginny getting married?^_^
10/10
Harry and Ginny
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{reviewid: 2125370, reviewer: 'FriendofMolly'}
25th May 2009:
Ah, so sweet an end. I would love to be a fly on the wall at Ron and Hermione's wedding. Are you sure you're going to end this? It's been a pleasure to read and review. I'll certainly watch for anything you care to post.
Author's Response: Thanks, glad you liked it! Yep, this will wrap it up for now (although I do need to fix a couple of small items from early chapters validated half a year ago); we'll see if the new movie inspires some more key strokes. In the meantime, this'll be here if you want to re-read it!
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{reviewid: 2121952, reviewer: 'Rose%20Delacour'}
21st May 2009:
I can't wait to read the last chapter! Well done!
Lots of Love,
Rose Delacour
100/10
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{reviewid: 2121875, reviewer: 'Harry%20and%20Ginny'}
21st May 2009:
great chapter. what's going to happen now? will u update soon please?^_^
10/10
Harry and Ginny
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{reviewid: 2121782, reviewer: 'FriendofMolly'}
21st May 2009:
That was just perfect. How sly Harry is, getting Ron into the Ministry without seeming to try. My heart is breaking, as I see this being chapter 26, and now you've only one more to go. Sniff Sniff, Sob. I look forward to the next and last.
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{reviewid: 2116550, reviewer: 'Rose%20Delacour'}
13th May 2009:
YAY! Finally! I'm so glad Ron purposed! Very well written!
Lots of Love,
Rose Delacour
infinity + 1/10
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{reviewid: 2116449, reviewer: 'Harry%20and%20Ginny'}
13th May 2009:
awww this was a cute chapter. what's going to happen now? will u update soon please?^_^
10/10
Harry and Ginny
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{reviewid: 2116249, reviewer: 'FriendofMolly'}
13th May 2009:
Oh that was great. A truly terrific celebration for the Cannons. HooRay! And the proposal was so Ron, it was definitely something Hermione wasn't expecting, giggle, giggle. I loved it.
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{reviewid: 2102733, reviewer: 'FriendofMolly'}
21st April 2009:
Hip, Hip, Hooray! That was One Great Quidditch Match. Of course Chuddley was Victorious, it's too bad Ludo probably made money on it. I do like how you bring happieness to the Four. Ron what a trip, he'll never change.
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{reviewid: 2102424, reviewer: 'Rose%20Delacour'}
21st April 2009:
AWESOME! Can't wait to see the last couple of chapters!
15/10
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{reviewid: 2102318, reviewer: 'Harry%20and%20Ginny'}
21st April 2009:
Awesome chapter. what's going to happen now? will u update soon please?^_^
10/10
Harry and Ginny
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{reviewid: 2099706, reviewer: 'lilyevans13'}
18th April 2009:
"weasley is your prat" was HILARIOUS
lol
~Lily
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{reviewid: 2096894, reviewer: 'pwcapone'}
14th April 2009:
I read the whole story in the space of 24 hours, so that should tell you something about the quality of the story. The scene where Harry set up Ludo was superb.
That said, there are a few problems. At times the dialouge was a little stiff, and occasionally your characters go off on big long speeches that people don't do in casual conversation in the real world. At times its appropriate, like during the big Harry/Bagman confrontation, but other times it feels a little unnatural.
Then again I'm no expert, and you've come this far, so stick to what got you here.
And.I forgot the other thing, but it's two in the morning so a little slip of the mind can be forgiven. Anyway, I'll try to remember so I can tell you when you update.
Keep up the good work!
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{reviewid: 2096682, reviewer: 'FriendofMolly'}
13th April 2009:
Oh yeah, that was a perfect followup chapter. I suspected that the capture of th Slytherin slugs wouldn't be too difficult. I can see things are moving quickly to the end of your story, but since there's still 4 more chapters, I know you're not finished with the good stuff yet. Bravo!!!
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{reviewid: 2096666, reviewer: 'FriendofMolly'}
13th April 2009:
Thank you, Thank you, Thank you! I had an inkling that with the way Harry was leading Ludo into bragging about his scheme, that others had to be within hearing distance. What a wonderful way to bag the Bagman. Terrific chapter. The Wand Trace is another really great idea. It was good of Harry to cover his and Ron's wands. It seems I missed an update, or you got two chaps validated at the same time. Onto the next
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{reviewid: 2096558, reviewer: 'HPlover101'}
13th April 2009:
Awww... I love the ending of this chapter! Can't wait for more!
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{reviewid: 2096213, reviewer: 'Harry%20and%20Ginny'}
13th April 2009:
aww they are so cute together. what's going to happen now? will u update soon please?^_^
10/10
Harry and Ginny
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{reviewid: 2094691, reviewer: 'Rose%20Delacour'}
11th April 2009:
Ludo is an idiot and definitely got what was coming to him.
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{reviewid: 2092884, reviewer: 'HPlover101'}
9th April 2009:
YAY! Bagman and Skeeter are in Azkaban! I can kind of tell that this is the climax chapter but it really spells everything out. Great work!
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{reviewid: 2092387, reviewer: 'Harry%20and%20Ginny'}
8th April 2009:
This is getting very interesting and i think u should update soon. why? because i'm curious now and that's not good. what's going to happen now?^_^
10/10
Harry and Ginny
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{reviewid: 2090934, reviewer: 'FriendofMolly'}
6th April 2009:
Please, Please, Please tell me, that there's someone from the ministry listening to all this. That piece of dragon dung CANNOT be allowed to proceed. I think that, like so many, Riddle being at the top of the list, Harry's being underestimated, yet again. I really hope that chapter 22 is in the queue. Don't keep us waiting, Please.
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