The first chapter confused me a little, it just seemed a bit messy (not in an awful way but in a way where occasionally it was a tiny bit hard to follow) BUT this chapter was much better, the style was clearer as was the story line and also i think you got the reader to really empathize with Rose so well done It's different to read a Rose story where she isn't brimming with Weasley confidence so that makes a nice change Good =] Report Review
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