i LOVE this story very much , very entertaining :DAuthor's Response: Thank you so much! I hope to not disappoint you too much with the dekay for this next chapter (which will hopefully be very short). xxx Report Review
i love this story
its so addicting
and i love all the ron/hermione parts
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that was so cute
i loved this chapter
this story is really good overall
i loved the ron and hermione moment
they're so cute!
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Wonderful story so far!! But I hope you add a new chapter soon!Author's Response: Thank yoyu so much, I hope I do too! :D Again, thank you for stickign with this story for so long. :D xxx Report Review
i love these!!! i just read them all and i hope theres more to come! =)Author's Response: Thank you so much. I'm so glad you're liking them. There is definitely more to come. :D Thanks so much for leaving a review. :D x Report Review
EPIC! Can't wait for the next chapter! YAY!!!Author's Response: Thank you! I'm rather terrible at updating this but I'm trying to do better recently. I hope you enjoy the other chapters. Thank you so much for leaving a review. :D xxx Report Review
u r my fav author. l hope u upd8 this or help me please very soon. im impatiantAuthor's Response: Thank you so much for the compliment! I apologise SO much for having such terribly irregular and infuriating updates for this stroy because I really do love it. It was my first fanfiction and I hope to return to it soon. My other story, which has been the main source of distracting me from this, is coming to a close so I sincerely hope that this story is back up and running with frequent chapters in a short while. Thank you so much for sticking with it, I'm so sorry about my poor updating! I think I may post Chapter 8 up in a few days time, even if I haven't yet written all of chapter 9. Again, thank you! xxx Report Review
I loved this chapter. Keep up the good work.Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing both my stories! You're absolutely amazing! :) xxx Report Review
i'm telling you, this is one of my favorite stories on here! it's so realistic and close to the book. i love that it's right after the book ends because it's kind of like an addition to MY harry potter series, you know? like, this is almost my harry potter 8...we all have different HP8's, and this is mine :) keep updating!!!Author's Response: Thank you so much. :) That's such an amazing compliment to get.
Yeah, I just love JK Rowling's world so much, why change it, you know? :)
Coolio! Thank you so much!
I actually DO have a chapter coming! I know *gasp* really? I've currently got another chapter on another story in the queue thoguh so I can't update this yet but as soon as that chapter is updated I'll be right back into this story. :)
I'm SO SO SO SO SO gald to hear that you're liking this story!
Next update should actually be soon, and I mean it this time!
Thank you so much, again! xx Report Review
awesome updates! really enjoyed everything.Author's Response: Thank you so so much. I'm SO happy that somebody is still reading! :) xxx Report Review
Hello! This is my first review ever!! I am not a member of this site but I visit like every day. I have read tons of stories. Goning from terrible ok to absolutly amazing. I really feel bad for not comenting on the amazing ones. I have decided to coment from now on. I would like to say that this story is amazing. It's not too gushy which is great. I love how you go from character to character and not focussing on one character's point of view. This story is great continue the good work. I also love how you actally write long notes at the beginning and end of your stories.Author's Response: Hey. :D I'm so honoured! :D
Thanks so much. :D
Yeah, I don't really like writing really gushy things but I still have to have a nice little cupful of romance going.
Yeah, I think it helps move ideas along too. :D
Ha, yeah, I tend to write very long Author's Notes... :D
I'm trying my hardest to get this story back on track but both my stories are going nowhere at the moment. I'm hoping that I can continue writing soon as I have some free time coming up.
Thanks again for reviewing! :D
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I like your story, though so far its going on the same lines as several others post hogwarts canon fics, you do have an intersting writing style. I understand if you are following canon there is not a lot that you can do initially, but I'd love to see how you make yours stand out:) good luckAuthor's Response: Thanks. :)
Yeah, I've sort of distcovered that too. I'm hoping that now I've got the basic "end of war, getting home" bit out of the way I can add in my own little situations.
Yeah, sometimes canon can be a little limited but then I suppose, if I take the time, I can probably come up with some cool scenes. :) I hope... :)
Thanks for reminding me to change things a little and keep them interesting! :)
Thanks for your uplifting review. :) I hope you like the next chapter, and I hope I get it up soon. :)
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Great update...but Ron didn't like her then? I think that's not true! ;)Author's Response: Thanks, reading it through I've realised how many grammatical mistakes there are! I'm terribly sorry about that. :)
I know! :) Of COURSE Ron liked Hermione then, he's just lying to his father to get out of a situation. :)
Thanks for taking the time to review. :) xxx Report Review
AH! i love this story! its amazing!! please, please, please add more soon! this is really an amazing story :)Author's Response: Hey! Thanks for the review! :))
Thanks! I'm happy you like it! :) Hopefully I'll be able to updte the next chapter tonight and it should be up soon. :)
Thank you!!! :)) xxx Report Review
funny keeping the Weasleys out four now good stargeyAuthor's Response: I'm so glad you found it funny! Lol. :)
Thanks. I hope you enjoy the next chapters too. :)
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WRITE MORE!!! I love ur story but is seems like u gave up on it.Author's Response: I will! I promise!
Thank you, and I know! I'm so sorry about that. By the time I returned to this story I realised how much I love it! :)
Hopefully the next chapter will be up soon and I promise that I will NEVER give up on this story. :)
Thanks for the review! :)
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That ending was funny - I love the whole parent-child squirming thing as they talk about things like that. It's always fun to read. I also liked how it was Arthur doing the talking but how you could tell he had been bullied into it by Molly. Very in character.
I loved your take on Ron and Hermione, especially Hermione trying to keep their relationship secret at first. It's different to what I've read before and I really liked it. I loved Hermione trying to be all covert and then Ginny spotting Ron. Classic.
I really like this story - I always love post-DH R/Hr stuff and I'm loving the fact that you say it's mostly fluff. Fluff is good :-) It's so fun. Looking forward to more xAuthor's Response: Lol, thanks! :) Yeah, I always imagined Molly would make Arthur do it because she has six boys and her husband would know them better than she would. Thanks, I was hoping everyone else would see it as being in character. :)
Lol, yeah! Hermione oesn't really know what she's doing at the moment so she tried to keep it secret until she could control the situation. Thanks, I'm glad it's worked out instead of going COMPLETELY wrong. :) Lol, yep. That Ginny is intuitive... :)
Thanks! :) Same, I love reading them and I love yours! :) Yep, mostly a load of fluff, but, hey!, even those who read action all the time need fluff! :) And fun, definitely! :)
Thanks! I hope I get another chapter up sometime soon! :) xxx
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this chapter was fantastic with Harry and Ginny saying they loved each other and how Ron and Hermione getting caught. i liked how Neville was a little scared that Hannah wouldn't like him but everyone encouraged him to talk to her. i think u should make a story about them. what do u think? will u update soon please?^_^
Harry and GinnyAuthor's Response: Thanks so much! I'm sorry for how long it's taken to update!
Lol, yeah, I thought that Neville would still be nervous around people but he'd talk to them more despite that nervousness. :)
I may do. :) That's actually a brilliant idea. As soon as I sort out my updating between my ongoing stories and get some inspiration I might write a little story. :)
I'll try to update soon, I promise I'll try! :)
Thanks so much for your review and yuor loyalty to the story! :)
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hmmm . this is really the best edited chapter.
KudosAuthor's Response: Why thank you. =] I really appreciated your review. =]
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Great story. I cant wait till you update. I like the ending with R/H it was really good. Great job.Author's Response: Thank you. =] I was a little unsure of it myself. =] You've made me feel much better. Thank you! =] Hopefully the next chapter will be up soon. xx Report Review
This was a REALLY, really good chapter. I loved it. The best. Finally Ron gets the balls to kiss her. Finally.
Continue, you have some of the best writing skills!Author's Response: That was exactly what I was thinking when I wrote it (Ron finally getting up thr nerves, I mean). =]
Thank you so much for the review. =]
I'm such a huge Ron/Hermione fan I really wanted to make it good for the others out there so I'm REALLY glad that you liked it. =]
Thank you So So much. =] xxx Report Review
i'm so glad both Harry and Ginny and Ron and Hermione worked out their problems. what is Harry going to say now that Ginny told him she loves him? will u update soon please?^_^
Harry and GinnyAuthor's Response: I'm planning on updating ASAP. =]
Thanks for reviewing because I really needed someone to give some feedback. =] Phew, =]
I wasn't sure what people would think of both couples sort of coming together in the same chapter but I wrote it anyway. I haven't updated in so long, I just put it all in one. =]
Thank you for reviewing! =] xx Report Review
Hi Kezzy! Oh my gosh I loved the Ron and Hermione scene at the end. Gah! They were so cute. I loved it :-) And they were so in character throughout the chapter which was ace - teasing each other but being caring at the same time. You got the levels and balance just right. It was really great and honestly reminded me of some of the conversations they have in the books (though obv with more fluff and longer which I'm definitely not going to complain about). Like all the stuff with Hermione telling Ron off for being an over protective brother - spot on.
I loved Ginny too. I loved how she put herself out there and opened up to Harry completely about all her emotions. I really loved her as a character at that point.
The speeches at the beginning were good too - I liked how you mangaged to capture the ways in which Harry, Hermione and Ron would vary in talking to the press.
Overall, another great chapter. You really have nothing to be worried about, and thank you so much for the shout out. It's no problem at all reviewing. I know how much it can help for motivation and support so it pleasure, especially as I really like your writing in this story.
Char xxAuthor's Response: Ahh, totally squealed like an Edward Cullen fan girl seeing a silvo volvo. =]
Thank you for this review. =] Thanks so much.
I was kind of scared that the R/Hr would be a little out of character, even though it did seem in character to me, but I had been re-reading the capter over and over again to get it right... so you sort of miss things after a while... =]
I couldn't resist having Ginny yell a little at Harry, obviously it's what she'd do as a Weasley. =] But, clearly, she didn't dwell on it too long. =]
Yeah, reviewing REALLY helps me get motivated to write another chapter because I feel like there's people waiting on the story and then I remember what I love about writing it. =]
Thank you, recently I've been worried that some of my writing has deteriorated slightly.
It's just my worrying, really. =]
Thanks so, so much.
Hopefully the next chapter will be up soon. And hopefully it'll entail some reactions. =]
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ive gotta say im really enjoying ur story so far, uve managed to write harry and ginny so well and u wouldent notice that u rushed the finish. id love it if u read my story and let me know what u think. thanksAuthor's Response: Thank you! =] This is such a nice review and awesome to know. =]]
Of course I'll read your story. I'll be happy to. And I'll try to review if I have time. =]]
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good chapter! i LOVVVE ginny/harry stuff!!! Also (just an idea) have a serious talk with ron and hermione about their relationship b/c im am still unsure where they stand in this story...and give ginny and harry some alone (kissing and talking) time. they deserve it! LOVE THE STORY SO FAR!Author's Response: Oh, thanks. I love the ideas. Yeah, really building up to the Ron/Hermione cause I love them. =]
Thank you so so much for the review. xxx Report Review
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