This is a great fan fiction for your first time, keep it up! I can't wait for more chapters! :D Report Review
Very good,I thought that since this was under a luna/neville you might want to put them in there. Report Review
A sort of strange start, being at the Burrow instead of still being at Hogwarts. I'll be interested in what direction you take. I noticed two Fred's names instead of George inserted in the funeral paragraph. But on the high side you have a good flow, and solid plot to start. Carry on. Report Review
Good start to your story--couple of things: The Burrow doesn't have an s at the end, and you started off Fred's funeral just fine with George surviving--then it changed to Fred surviving, I'm confused? Report Review
It was short but good. I liked it and the fact that you have a cool title makes me think you've got big plans for this story and the plot so I'm really interested to see where it's headed. Report Review
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