good story update soon

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Yah a little iffy on the story. It was good but it was also a little rushed. You might want to re-read it over again and fix the spelling mistakes. I like the whole plot though. Good job!

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I really Like dis story. AW!!! LOL! I hope u update soon!!!

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A little bit confusing. Not enough details, its rather hard to picture in your head. Characters seem a little blase...

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intressting beginning so keep it ocming :D

Author's Response: yep on it way
thnx for readin
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reviewin
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Pretty cool. It will be interesting to see where this goes. But I would suggest to try to focus on grammer, typing, paragraphs and other things. Otherwise its hard to read. Otherwise the story is pretty interesting! I hope you enjoy your new house.

~Slytherin_Princess44

Author's Response: thnx 4 the review
i really appreciate the
Advise
and i'll try to keep that in mind when writin the rest

thnx again

and thnx 4 readin

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this was great! epp :) can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: thanks

yea soz its takin sooo long
but it should be up soon i
hope



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update soon can't wait for more chapters

Author's Response: updating now trying to find time sorry
be up soon

and thanks for readin

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Great story! Keep up the great work! Will Hermione still look the same when she is Adelina? And I hope she will still stay with Draco. I'm so happy for Hermione---she will have her real parents now!

Author's Response: thanks for reading
well you will have to keep
reading to find out
but first i have to update
sorry it taking so long
be up soon

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