aww such a cute story! and humorous Report Review
Aww. Fluff :) that was sweet xxx Report Review
Thats it! what! lol.. really good story, I was like all excited to go to the next chapter. Report Review
Aw, I absolutely adored this! Seriously, it was so cute and sweet.
I really liked Daphne a lot. She was very real and adorable and releatable. And so funny and awkward and awesome.
Al was so cool, too. So cute and when he said he had a knack for making pretty girls cry, I was like, "AWWWSS!!!"So sweet.
And when they kissed! So adorable and awesome. Especially the last sentence. Loved it.
WONDERFUL job! Loved it to heck!
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aw! i loved this. albus is really really really cute, and so is daphne! 10/10Author's Response: Aww yay! I'm so glad that you liked it. Those two really are adorable, I agree. Thank you for the lovely review! :) Report Review
You know the really cool thing about your stories? Some of them are so light-hearted and fun. And then you have others that are so dark and sad. And then you have some that are a mixture of both. It’s just awesome that you can write both happy and sad.
This was SUCH a cute story. Poor Daphne. She’s so clumsy. And awkward. And unsure of herself. This was sooo sweet. I don’t really know what else to say.
I do, however, have to quote. I don’t normally quote. Hell, I have never really quoted before. But I have to. Your stories just have some of the best lines ever.
I don’t exactly know why I’m quoting. I mean, you wrote it all. It’s a bit like you painting a wall and then me coming in and going, “Sweet, let me paint over it, as well!”… and that is somehow supposed to be a compliment?
“Is he related to me?” Rose added.
“Pink bunny slippers-“
“Celery with peanut butter-“
“Seven days, baby-“
War heroes apparently like to hang out together.
“It’s just that, well, my friends told me that I shouldn’t eat fast or take big bites.”
And really, the idea of another person’s tongue in my mouth kind of disgusted me.
Maybe I should just commit myself to a convent and become a nun. Save myself a lot of trouble.
But that would actually require me paying attention at services – something I could never do, no matter how hard I tried. Yeah, being a nun was out. Maybe I could be a hermit. I think I would make a good hermit. I had never minded being alone.
I noticed that he had really nice, straight, shiny white teeth. It made my stomach feel all warm and fuzzy.
“What if I blow him up?”
And then I’d gone and gotten him third degree burns and really sick so that he couldn’t use his arms.
I absolutely freaking love your stuff. In case my last hundred or so reviews haven’t already indicated that to you…
:DAuthor's Response: Wow! I'm so sorry its taken me so long to get around to answering this review. I have plenty excuses, but I'll spare you them and just answer your review. :P
Wow, seriously you are so flattering. I'm blushing. I'm so glad you like that about my writing - I really do like writing both genres and I don't think life is a mixture of all bad or all good. So I try to write both. I'm so happy to hear you think I do a good job at it. :) Thank you!
Yay! I'm so happy to hear that you liked this story too! :D Daphne really is so clumsy and awkward, but it's all part of her charm. :P
Haha, quote away my dear. I love it when people quote. It helps me know what people like and what I'm doing well. :D
And haha! Yay! I love all those quotes. It feels like a blast from the past reading them all again. I'm so glad that you liked them. I never think I'm particularly funny, so I'm glad other people think I am! :P
Thank you so much for all of these lovely reviews! I'm so flattered that you like all of my stories, seriously. *blushes* Thank you so so much! Report Review
Oh man I wanted more! Lol. I would have like to see their "relationship" progress, but this is good enough for me. Good job!Author's Response: Haha, you don't remember from Daddy Dearest? I guess I more just borrowed her name, but Daphnie from this story becomes Al's girlfriend after Anna in Daddy Dearest. :P I'm glad you liked this story though! Thank you for reading and reviewing! :) Report Review
i enjoyed this fic quite alot and i was wondering if u could do a sequel. what do u think?^_^
10/10 all chapters
Harry and GinnyAuthor's Response: Well, I'm so happy to hear you liked this story. As for a sequel, I don't know. I don't really have the inspiration for one. Just really what was here. Anyway, thank you for reviewing! Report Review
I must say your mother has good taste in titles XD
Well done on this story, i found it quite funny tbh.
I'm sure alot of girls can relate to this i'm sure.
Looking forward to the last chapter of Daddy Dearest :D
Welldone with this story :)
Estella xAuthor's Response: Haha, I'll be sure to tell her. :P I'm glad you liked it and found it funny - it was meant to be something lighthearted I could write after Daddy Dearest. Not got too long now to wait on Daddy Dearest. Thank you very much! :) Report Review
Im sick and home alone and a story like this was just what I was after, so thank you!Author's Response: Aww, you're welcome! Thank YOU for the great review! I hope you start feeling better! :) Report Review
Aw- such a cute story. I'm reading a lot of Scorrose and this was such a lovely different character. Daphne's emotions about the first kiss and her general apprehension about relationships strikes a chord.
Oh-too bloody cute!! Was giggling and empathizing all the way
Love your writing style too. I do hope you keep writing-lots!
10/10Author's Response: Aww, thank you very much! I don't read much Scorose, but I do write one, so I agree, writing this was definitely a nice change of pace for me. I'm so happy to hear that you could connect with Daphne on that - that was exactly what I was going for. :)
I'm so happy to hear that you like my writing style and I fully plan on writing lots more. :)
Thank you so much for the great review! :) Report Review
I loved it! I love the last line. She sounded a lot more confident then. Yay! They kissed. Keep writing! :&)Author's Response: Yay! I'm so glad that you liked it. Yes, they did, and yes, she did! It was time she got over her fears. I will definitley keep writing, but I'm afraid that this story is finished. Who knows? Maybe I'll get inspiration for more later. Thank you for reviewing! :) Report Review
I loved it! I hope Al isn't hurt too badly. Poor Daphne! She must feel awful. Great chapter! :7)Author's Response: Aww, I'm sure she does. Knowing her, she's probably over the top guilty. And poor Al. I agree. Thank you very much! I'm glad you enjoyed it! :) Report Review
I loved it! I can't wait to see what happens. I wonder if she'll tell him. I love her supportive friends. They seem awesome! :7)Author's Response: Yay! Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. And I guess you'll just have to keep reading huh? Lucky you, the rest of the story is already up. :) And yeah, her friends are pretty awesome. Meddling, but with good hearts. Thank you for the wonderful review! :) Report Review
Oh wow! She just ran out on a guy! I loved it! He sounded really nice! :7)Author's Response: Hehe, yep, she did! Silly Daphne. I agree, he was rather nice. You've gotta feel bad for guys like him - he never stood a chance. I'm so glad that you liked this! Thank you for reviewing again. :) Report Review
I love it! Great start! I can't wait to see what happens next. :7)Author's Response: Hehe, thank you very much! I'm glad you liked it! :) Lucky you, the next chapter's already there. Hehe. Report Review
cutest story ive read in a super super long time. I was cheering for Daphne the whole time haha!Author's Response: Aww yay! I'm so happy you liked this and thought it was cute! I like a little fluff now and again. And I'm so happy you were rooting for Daphne - she's so sweet and innocent, its rather hard not to root for her happy ending. Thanks so much for the wonderful review! Report Review
Naw, what a sweet ending! I really liked this, thank you so much for writing :D Only I still have one question: why was Al so ignoring her after she spilled the potion? Forgive me if I missed something, but I don't think it was explained. Anyway, great story! Very sweet, very cute, just fabulous - just what I needed after listen to stupid lectures all day :) Again, thank you for writing!
Favorite bit: "I also specialize in tripping down stairs and falling out of chairs," I breathed because by now he was so close that our chests were nearly touching. - it broke the tension really well, and it shows Daphne's cute and wonderful sense of humor :)
Well done on a fabulous story! 10/10, for the whole thing :DAuthor's Response: :) Thank you very much! I'm so happy you liked it. And oh bugger. I didn't fully explain that, did I? Well, I'll explain it now. :)
Al was pretty angry at her for a while after she spilled it - as he had a right to be, she hurt him pretty bad - but knew that she felt bad and didn't want to take his temper out on her.
I'm glad you liked the sweetness and cuteness - I agree, sometimes you need fluff after a hard day. I'm glad you found it in this story. :) You're very welcome for writing!
Aww yay! I'm glad that you liked that line.
Thank you so so much! :) Report Review
Oh no! She was going so well! *sigh* I guess it was bound to happen at some point - we can't all have good luck, can we?
Favorite bit: "I mean something very, very important."
"Okay," she said, still playing that innocently confused card. "So what is it?"
"Have you seen my cat?"Author's Response: I know! She really was. But its not interesting if things always go well. :P That, and I imagine that it would be a sign of the apocalypse if Daphne went a whole Potions lesson without doing something wrong. Haha. I liked that quote too. :) Thank you again for a lovely review! Report Review
Aw! Poor Daphne! But at least they were okay about it in the end :) Rose and the girls are very sweet, I can totally see why Daphne likes them. But telling Al?! What are they thinking!
Favorite bit: "My cousin! You could be family!"Author's Response: Yeah. Those girls just want what's best for one another. :) They just have an odd way of showing it sometimes. I'm glad you can see why Daphne is friends with them. And I'd say that they weren't thinking. At all. :P
Thank you very much for another wonderful review! Report Review
Aww, she's so cute! I feel kind of bad for Mike though - I know a few guys like Mike, and you have got to feel sorry for them. They have it tough.
Favorite line: "Ah, but that is the beauty of it, my dear," Olivia said, slinging her arm around my shoulders and steering me towards the courtyard. "You don't have a choice in the matter."Author's Response: :) I'm glad you think Daphs is cute. She really is so much fun to write and innocent. I feel bad for Mike too - one of my best guy friends always happens to be a Mike and I always feel so horrible for him. :( And yay! Another fave line. Olivia is so much fun to write. Thank you for another great review! Report Review
Wow, great beginning! I really, really like Daphne, she's very sweet - just like imagined the daughter of Neville and Hannah to be :) And Rose, Lucy and Olivia are very sweet! Albeit, slightly nosy :P
Favorite line: "Are you sure you're not a lesbian?" Nancy piped up from across the room. Author's Response: Yay! Thank you very much! I'm glad you enjoyed it and that you liked Daphne. I agree, she is very much Neville and Hannah's daughter. Haha, yeah, her friends are rather nosy. But they have good intentions. And yay! Fave quotes. I'm glad you liked that one. Nancy is a riot. :) Thank you so much for the wonderful review! Report Review
aww she got her first kiss...and her second,lol
i like ur story ...i WOULD write in this review more but i gtg take a shower
~Annie(",)Author's Response: Aww, yay, she did! Finally, huh? Im so happy you liked this story. And haha, its ok. I understand. Showers are important. Thank you for such lovely reviews! :) Report Review
aww...poor girl...i hope she doesn't feel guilty... =/Author's Response: Yeah, poor Daphs. She really got herself into a pickle. But chances are, shes gonna feel guilty for it - probably gonna feel like she let her friends down. Thanks for reviewing! :) Report Review
that was an awesome story, so romantic. Great Job!Author's Response: Aww, thank you very much! I'm glad you thought it was romantic. :) Thanks again! Report Review
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