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Review #1, by typewriter 1 out of 1

14th July 2013:
I don't know what about this pairing was so perfect, but it was. It must have just been your writing, because it made it seem like an effortless reach. I wasn't thinking to myself how weird it was the entire time. I loved the pass/fail idea, and Neville's words of wisdom. Well done! It's hard to make a non-canon pairing so lovely.

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Review #2, by Becky 1 out of 1

19th August 2012:
I really liked this. The writing was beautiful and it was sweet without casuing me to puke. Great work, love!

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Review #3, by fairytalelover3 1 out of 1

2nd August 2011:
I really liked it. I'm not a fan of Neville/Hermione but this was good. That was sweet of Neville and that is probably exactly how Hermione would react. I thought it was a really good length, not too short or too long but i haven't read any more of your stories, off to do that now actually.

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! Thank you so much for reviewing!

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Review #4, by DracoFerret11 1 out of 1

17th April 2009:
Hey there, DarkRose again! :D

Great story!

I've never read a Hermione/Neville before but I have to say that I really liked it.

You write extremely well. The emotions leak out of my computer screen. (seriously, I think it's oozing...) :]

Your descriptions and characterization were flawless as well.

Stupendous job! :]

--DracoFerret11/DarkRose

Author's Response: I'm glad that you were able to enjoy this pairing even though you'd never read it before. Honestly, before writing this one-shot I'd never read this pairing either. :D I hope I've officially turned you onto it. Thank you so much for the lovely comments. It's amazing that you connected with the emotions I was trying to portray. I put a lot of work into that area of my writing. Thanks for reviewing!

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Review #5, by ClearAsCrystalrEyes 1 out of 1

19th January 2009:
That was different, but a good kind of different!

Author's Response: :D Thank you! It was actually my first time ever attempting Neville to this degree. I liked writing it, so I'm glad you enjoyed reading it.

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Review #6, by _Keeper_ 1 out of 1

28th November 2008:
I really liked this one-shot (It's hard to find well-writen HermioneNeville stories) You wrote both of them perfectly in character

a straight 10 out of 10

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked it, because it was totally out of my comfort zone :) I wrote it for a challenge at the forums actually. I've been trying to test myself lately. Anyway, thanks again!

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