I really liked this. The writing was beautiful and it was sweet without casuing me to puke. Great work, love! Report Review
I really liked it. I'm not a fan of Neville/Hermione but this was good. That was sweet of Neville and that is probably exactly how Hermione would react. I thought it was a really good length, not too short or too long but i haven't read any more of your stories, off to do that now actually.Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! Thank you so much for reviewing! Report Review
Hey there, DarkRose again! :D
I've never read a Hermione/Neville before but I have to say that I really liked it.
You write extremely well. The emotions leak out of my computer screen. (seriously, I think it's oozing...) :]
Your descriptions and characterization were flawless as well.
Stupendous job! :]
--DracoFerret11/DarkRoseAuthor's Response: I'm glad that you were able to enjoy this pairing even though you'd never read it before. Honestly, before writing this one-shot I'd never read this pairing either. :D I hope I've officially turned you onto it. Thank you so much for the lovely comments. It's amazing that you connected with the emotions I was trying to portray. I put a lot of work into that area of my writing. Thanks for reviewing! Report Review
That was different, but a good kind of different!Author's Response: :D Thank you! It was actually my first time ever attempting Neville to this degree. I liked writing it, so I'm glad you enjoyed reading it. Report Review
I really liked this one-shot (It's hard to find well-writen HermioneNeville stories) You wrote both of them perfectly in character
a straight 10 out of 10Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked it, because it was totally out of my comfort zone :) I wrote it for a challenge at the forums actually. I've been trying to test myself lately. Anyway, thanks again! Report Review
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