Oh! It was so sad I cried! But it was really good, too. But sad... it made me cry really hard thoughAuthor's Response: Wow, that's actually a huge compliment in a strange way =)
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing =)
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omg..this is such a sad story. i had tears in my eyes. i would love to read more...update soon pleaseAuthor's Response: so glad you liked it =)
I'm not sure I'll ever write more to this though, for many personal reasons. Maybe one day.
Thanks for your review!!
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Oh. MY. God. YOu HAD ME CRYING! shame on you! That was such a sad yet amazing story! oh and just so you know... I read your A/N at the beginning (which I don't usually pay any attention to) and u're adorable! Just so you know~ and I did consider you being JK for like two seconds til I read the next line! everyone says I need help so thank you for confirming that fact.*NOT* anywho great story and keep writing more! *Claps and tons of cookies* -CharlyAuthor's Response: hehehe i havnt had a review in ages and then you go and make me feel all loved and stuff =]
so glad you liked it - kinda glad i made you cry to, but not in a morbid way, it just means i did my job well lol.
-munches on cookie and grins- Ta!!
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oh my goodness. that was depressing. so good, like i'm on the verge of tears. poor sirius. so helpless. this is all so depressing. if anything, he should be saved for himself. and remus. and harry. harry does need him. if sirius had figured out a way to claim his innocence, then he could have taken harry from those people and raised him right. *sigh* 10/10! good job! update soon!
-xoxo, rowenaravenclaw94Author's Response: *gasp*
You again! lol
I know, Sirius's character frustrates me so much, he could be so good but was crushed form such a young age...
Sigh. I may just be in love with him.
Ha, enough of my obscure fiction crushes, thank you for reviewing!!!
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That was a very emotional chapter. I look forward to reading the POV of the other marauders. You really conveyed Sirius' devastation (over the death of Lily & James) very well.Author's Response: thanks so much for ur review
thats mostly what i was concerned about, was capturing the emotions, thats basically what all the chapters will be about, kinda snap shots of emotions.
Thanks for reading, i should hav the nxt chapter up soonish.
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