I liked this a lot! I think you've got Sirius' character down to a T. [“So you would hurt your son in face of the truth? To stop your secret from spreading any further? God, you are a sad, sad old man.”] - my favourite line. This is definitely something Sirius would say. I loved the way you portrayed the Blood-elitist family Black! You've got a few grammar/spelling errors. 'Insulting' and 'Insulted' should both be lower case, and 'Mud blood' should be one word. Aside from that, I really enjoyed this. TEN POINTS TO GRYFFINDOR. Report Review
thats good. i liked the story. i just wished it was longer.but it was quite good.great job! Report Review
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