{reviewid: 2715160, reviewer: 'S'}
2nd July 2012:
How could Hermione possibly know she was pregnant a few hours after Draco practically raped her? And woman are pregnant for 9 months not a few weeks, so why would she go see madam pomphrey when she is almost 9 months pregnant, and I think a bunch of slytherins would have gotten more than a detention for kiddnapping and raping someone, and obviously the teachers knew that the slytherins do that every year, so why wouldn't it be stopped?
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{reviewid: 2585436, reviewer: 'IRISH%20REPUBLICAN%20ARMY'}
6th September 2011:
wait i am so confused!
what just happened?
how does she/he know that she is pregnant
hot long was the baby in the womb?
i am so so so so so lost!
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{reviewid: 2530877, reviewer: 'Jem'}
6th June 2011:
You should not be having sex the day after giving birth and their parents will kill them for not telling them at all. Id be fair pissed if my kid did that to me.
Yay Dramione =)
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{reviewid: 2530872, reviewer: 'Jem'}
6th June 2011:
It just gets worse. Just a few facts a) the sperm probably hasnt even reached the egg when Hermione and Malfoy are touching her belly b) Im sure magical folk have some form of the morning after/plan b pill and c) I'm sure someone would have noticed her pregnancy after 9months and she would be huge...and why hasnt she checked when she was due prior to it being due in a week or couldnt hermione have figured out her due date considering she knew conception.
On a positive note your wonderful spelling is making me happy.a lot of people can not spell =]
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{reviewid: 2530868, reviewer: 'Jem'}
6th June 2011:
Ummm Im not sure why exactly they are getting all upset and and making plans for the baby...I mean you can have sex unprotected and not get pregnant. Not hating on your story or anything. just thought they should have made certain before stressing absurdly much
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{reviewid: 2178703, reviewer: 'HarryPotterLover101'}
30th July 2009:
it was abit to fast she got pregers then next second she new she was pregers n we all know it odnt happen like that then next week she has the baby :S but it was good
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{reviewid: 2069315, reviewer: 'adluvshp'}
6th March 2009:
WOW...it was so sweet.really...I liked it.
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{reviewid: 2031662, reviewer: 'Fayge'}
13th January 2009:
It was a good story, it just wasn't written very well. There were a lot of mistakes, and the sentences were akward. I think you should put more effort and detail into your writing. But I liked the story-line.
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{reviewid: 2018048, reviewer: 'Lexi'}
27th December 2008:
MORE! I must have more!
HAHAH seriously: I
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{reviewid: 2008597, reviewer: 'anonymous'}
14th December 2008:
Out of character, unoriginal plot, innacurate facts... the one thing I liked is the idea of the Slytherin party.
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{reviewid: 1997809, reviewer: 'lolliepop'}
29th November 2008:
great story
loved it
cant wait to read
wat happens next
=D
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