:D Author's Response: I'm going to take that big grin as a good sign. ;] Hehe, so thank you! Report Review
Hey! Great story!
I can imagine each and every character doing what they're doing very clearly while I read this :)
I'll be looking forward to your next chapter!
10/10Author's Response: Thank you! I'm trying to work on including details and making it seem like a movie in the mind. =P I'm glad I'm at least SOMEWHAT improving! x] Thanks for the R&R! Report Review
Well what can I say but only that the gangs all here (James, Lily, Remus etc) with the possible addition of a new face to the crowd. I think that your off to a good start to this story. There is alot going on and I hope you update soon so that I can read more, and offer you a more comprehensive review next time round. 10/10.Author's Response: Yes, this first chapter was definitely a bit of a filler chapter. The story will probably be a little slow starting off, but hopefully the pace will pick up a little! Thank you very much for the R&R! =] Report Review
Terms of Service
categories & genres
short story collection