did you abandon this story?

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this story is so funny! round two probably was like WW1 what with two pregnant and hormonal sisters who hate each other

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Oh my gosh! This is fantastic! I went in ready to see a not so good story but then I thought, "Hey, it's only a chapter. What the heck?" and I am so glad I read it. The ending was a little bit cheesy but amusing. I think you should have put more interaction with James and his parents, that would have added something. Overall I thought it was cute. You should consider writing a full story about James and Lily and Lily's background. I have read a lot of them but not a lot are very accurate and you do well in doing that so maybe you could make it more realistic.
This is my fist review I keep wanting to tell you I am a big fan of your writing. I LOVED Delicate and Still Delicate. Just the way you made Rose was the exact way I had pictured her. I notice you design a lot of posters for other books I like the way you make them but you use different faces than the actor that played the part in the movie and I was wondering if this is because you visioned it differently or if you couldn't find the character in the right positions.
I am really a big fan of not only your fanfics but your writing style and I'm trying to write a fanfic myself but I can't seem to get any where with it.

I have a million more questions but I can't manage to get them all out so I'll be reviewing on another fanfic soon.

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Haha, as great as always!

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Hi! So, I've read the Delicate series (loved it by the way!) and I liked this too. I do wish that you had perhaps gone into more detail, and made it longer? I think that would have made it better. And maybe you could have done lots of different points of view. Like, how did James feel, or Sirius, or granny, or the other characters? Don't get me wrong, it's really good, but I feel it could have been better. Sorry, I'm just putting it out there. You probably won't read this anyway. Oh well. And.yeah, I suppose that's it :)

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it was actually really good for only one chapter!! :)

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You're a really good writer, this is really realistic and could actually have happened.

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This is absolutely brilliant! 10/10! :D

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I like this! :) its fantastic

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I really really enjoyed this story :) I loved the Petunia vs. Lily and Vernon vs. James thing. I know James would beat Vernon to a pulp in a heartbeat :)) The only other thing I can say is that I want another chapter. The conflicts of Petunia and Lily are so awesome to read. :)

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That had me laughing the whole time!
I absolutely love George's thoughts. I would love it if you wrote more stories like this.

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That had me laughing the whole time!
I absolutely love George's thoughts. I would love it if you wrote more stories like this.

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Aha actually love this book. I've read a couple of your other books and I think your a brilliant author XD xx

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This is brilliant. You wrote about James's family exactly how I would imagine them to be. The different perspectives were well written and it had just the right amount of humour. I loved the relationship between Granny Evans and Sirius! Also, you clearly showed how different James/Lily and Vernon/Petunia are.

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Hey this was very cute and sweet!! I could imagine it plausible to with the way Lily and Petunia fought in the books. I read Delicate and Still Delicate and I love them both your latest piece of writing has not failed to impress me. The hilarity of Granny Evan's and Sirius laughing uncontrollably at this scene is just perfect. And the ending was very nice too. Keep up the writing I'm an avid fan of yours and will keep reading whatever you post!!! :)

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You're a very talented author, I've only read this story and the one about the founders and I'm already a fan. Keep it up, and I want to see more updates on the story about the founders.

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This is fantastic! I loved every bit of it! I think you captured how different petunia and lily and James and Vernon are perfectly. I love James's family and how much granny evans loved sirius! Priceless! it was so funny. good job. I would love to read about round 2 if you ever write about it.

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This is one of the best one-shots I've ever read! Very realistic and hilarious at the same time :)

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that could not have been better

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very cute story! it made me laugh.

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Hilarious ending!!! And the story was very funny too! It was certainly a warm, breezy and light hearted story. I like stories like this than serious ones.
Good job!
You always write good stories.
Ashwini

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WOW! That was really interestin n funny as well... i luv how u ended it the way it started... ur a really gud author:)

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I wish it continued and went further into detail right before Voldemort kill them off

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This actually made me laugh a bit. The muggle perspective of James and Sirius was really well written, as was the wizard perspective of the Evans' house.

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This was so cute! I love all your stories frankly, but I really enjoyed this. I bet this is exactly what would've went down. In my opinion I think there might have been a little more build up between petunia and lily, but still this was great. (:

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