I am confused from chapter 4 and five. How did Harry and Ron went from fighting to like being best buddies???


-Asphodel

Author's Response: This was during the beginning of my writing "career". I wasn't the clearest writer, but I've learned a few things between then and now. Technically, Ron wasn't fighting Harry...Harry just went berserk on him. Obviously, there's rough patches throughout their entire history, so it's nothing big.

However...certain other things are more deeply rooted, as we find out later on, and those provide the real conflict between Ron and Harry.

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I loved why did you kill off Ginny that was upsetting but still it was Awsome thank you very much!

Author's Response: I suggest you keep reading. I'm fairly certain you will be pleased.

No spoilers from me! ;)

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Srsly your story just keeps jumping its getting a bit hard to read but the story line is really good. why are there so many impostors and whats going on? there is no real clear plot. but i really do like the abilities you have given harry

Author's Response: At this point, they are on the run from the law. It's one of the pushes for Harry to start finding things out...He's a little reluctant at first, see? So he needs those influences and motivations. Thanks for reviewing.

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This has been a wonderful story!! I can't wait to read the other 2!!! :-D 10/10!!

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I wonder how them being met by the bad guys at the end makes them feel.

Author's Response: I am wondering why you refer to something that doesn't happen in this chapter. Any such event happens later on. Anyway...they were unsurprised. Harry had some small idea that it might happen, thus his taking Lavender along.

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I am truly hating the draconic group thingy. How dare they repeatedly from Harry!!

Loving the story though. Keeping me on my feet with all these twists. It is really unpredictable. Besides it being Harry framed and him being impersonated.

Author's Response: I love keeping my readers on their toes...and keeping them guessing. Such a thrill to make sure they don't know what's going to happen until the very end... >:D

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A very good story. I really enjoyed it. I admit I was a little frustrated in a few chapters but you came through. I look forward to the sequel. Thanks

Author's Response: Any writer can frustrate readers in a chapter or two, whether it be due to puzzling questions, confusing plot points, or just general vagueness in regards to certain details. But usually, there is a reason...either it's going to be explained later on, or it really wasn't necessary to include. I hope that explanation was adequate...thanks for reviewing!!!

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cant wait for the quidditch tryouts!!!

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Im loving this story, cant wait to read the next chapter

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Okay, Argetlam you got me i originally didn't think this would go into a depth of reading that i am so picky about. Since i was there to get you started on this website and give you feedback on things and show you some good reads. I kept thinking to myself that it would be a while before you had a writing style that i was confident enough i could read about and not dislike, but i have to admit you did well for your first story. The plot line was good. the structure of the story was easily followed. The only thing i found wrong and was peeved about in your writing were the misspellings that happened quite frequently. Other than that. I see your writing style taking you very far in life. Congrates on your first completed story and keep it up.

Phoenix_fire23

Author's Response: I'm happy as a pig in mud that you are still looking at my stories. Been a long time, man...anyway, thanks for the review. Cheers!

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What!!!
Ginny dead, and they behave as if they just lost a toy??

What in the name of Merlin's beard is happening?

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very good ! !! ! ! ! ! ! !

DAVE

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good chapter , like the story off to read more ! !

DAVE

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longer chapter but not much . . .

Dave

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way too short (for me )


Off to read more

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ok another interesting chapter, but they have to fight Dominion . . . this shall be interesting ? ?

DAVE

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ok its an egg similar to Eragon . .

Very good

DAVE

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Oy Vey , well isn't this interesting ? ? ?

Off to read more !

Dave

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good chapter, not sure how her hand will fare but lets see shall we !

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OK didn't they think that someone would have a wand pointed at them ?

DOH ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Lavender ? ? ? ? ? ? Ginny a heir also ?

Wow a twisted road we are on . . .

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ok way to short again . . .


dave

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Off to read yet another chapter ! ! ! !

D a v e

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Not Me, i have to read EVERY chapter LONG or short good or bad I WILL read all of them ! !!

And review tooo !

DAVE

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Way to short . . . . . . .

dave

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