This is stunning. I love the image you've painted of Ted and Andromeda.Author's Response: Thank you so much for your wonderful review! Report Review
This is so deep and intense. As the story went on, I felt myself becoming more and more involved with the story. Very well written, and there are to many things that I want to talk about, and it definately wouldn't fit into this reviewing box. Her life is so sad, and...well. I don't know how to put it.
When she showed Ted the grave, I did feel a little lump in my throat- it really was a very touching scene. I think that your characterisation of the sisters, and pureblood society as a whole was very well written, and realistic. Obviously, pureblood society can be destructive to people, and this highlights that.
Just, wow, very deep.
LeanneAuthor's Response: Thank you so much for your review :) the thing I wanted to demonstrate in the story was that Andy WAS a Black, she married below herself in many's eyes. And I just really wanted to demonstrate that she still had some of the Black-streaks in her, even if she tried to escape them. Thank you so much for reviewing. Report Review
Wow. Just wow. You're characterisation of Andromeda and Ted were so strong and interesting. I really loved this. So so much! I've written a one-shot of the two and it's completely different but yours is just so intriguing. I absolutely love it.
The story in itself was very dark, with a lot of strong themes but you wrote them wonderfully.
Andromeda's change was really good and I think Ted was such a great character though he could have been a little more clear in his actions. But nevertheless, it was amazing!
Well done!Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review :) I loved Andy and this was how I pictured her. I think it is vital to note that she IS a Black; she isn't all light. Ted helped her become a better person and she learned from her mistakes. Thank you so much for reviewing :) Report Review
that was awsom. i didn't mind the length at all, i just kept reading and reading. WOW, wat a storyAuthor's Response: thank you so much :D im glad you liked it. Thank you for reviewing! Report Review
I loved getting lost in her story. Your writing was fantastic and I love the way you portrayed her charcter. That was one of the best stories I've ever read.Author's Response: Thank you so much for your wonderful review :D Thank you!! Report Review
This was unlike any Andromeda/Ted story I've ever read before and I love it. It was beautifully written and the lines from the poem were a nice touch.
Lia.Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review :D Report Review
Wow. That was... wow. Completely phenomenal, actually. I loved your take on Andromeda's life - it was wonderfully original because she's so often shown as the 'good' Black sister, but I think I preferred your characterisation, actually, and it certainly makes a lot more sense, because as you said, she is still a Black. Your writing was utterly amazing, as well, and a complete pleasure to read. Seriously, seriously good. I'm extremely jealous.
10/10, and an instant favourite!Author's Response: THANK YOU.
This is one of those reviews that make my day!! Thank you so much. Im so happy you liked it! Report Review
This was a stunning story!
I absolutely loved this look into Andromeda's life, which was beautifully told.Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing! Report Review
We aren't just reading Andomeda's story, we ARE Andromeda!!
that's the only way I can really put how beautifully you characterise: as usual a delicious read!!Author's Response: thank you!! you just made my day ^^ Report Review
wow... love it... so moving and i really feel for her. i don't normally comment but i thought this story deserved it.Author's Response: aww.. thank you so much for commenting xD It really makes my day to read reviews:] Thank you so much Report Review
Incredible. You show a side to Andromeda that I never would have thought of, her family life, her relationships, Ted, the baby. Fantastic. I loved it and couldn't bring myself to stop reading. I wish I had your talent. Great job :)Author's Response: omg... THANK YOU! Im blushing here, ure seriously too kind, thank you so much:] Report Review
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