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Review #1, by FanofCards25

4th November 2008:

Not a bad start :) Something I noticed is that you need to keep in mind that Hermione is muggleborn, she would know what the muggle objects are. The point of view was a bit unclear as well. Other than that, it is an interesting story. Can't wait to see what is in store for Hermione in the next chapter. 9/10

Author's Response: Thanks for reading and for the review XD

I will look over the chapter again, and see if I can make any changes. Thanks for the advice. Can't wait to get the next chapter up and running!

~seeker

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Review #2, by Gryffin_Duck

Trading Broomsticks for Automobiles

3rd November 2008:

I really like the plot for this story. I'm really interested in what happens with the murderers and how Hermione adjusts after the lawsuits.

I think some dialogue might be good, though. I also really like the title, it's perfect. :)

Author's Response: Thank you for the advice. Much appreciated :D

Poor Hermoine's tale has barely begun (and I'm writing the next installment as we speak!) I can't wait to show you what happens next!

Will keep in mind your advice about the dialogue, and as for the title, just wait and see the significance!

~seeker

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