I like this story very much. The way you conveyed the main character's feelings were great realy felt it. Hope u write more.

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:( Very, very touching. Okay, is it sad that I'm sitting here about to cry? Anyways, good job writing. There were only like two mistakes so seriously, it was very talented writing. Keep it up!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! Getting reviews like this always make my day!

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You made me start crying :)

Author's Response: Aweee! I was going for tearss xD

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Wow... just...wow. I cried. I smiled. This is the best I've read.

Author's Response: Really ? Thank you so much, you have no idea how much this means to me, really I was having a horrible evening and you just made it so much better, thank you (:

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A beautiful look at how things could have been. I always thought J.K.Rowling would kill one of the trio but in the end she was too kind.
Well written, good story, nearly made me cry (knowing it didn't really turn out like this stopped me).

Author's Response: Thanks so much, it seems it gave you the effect I was going for (: Getting reviews like this really make it worth writting (:

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amazing story. Well written just how i think ron will react if Hermione had died. I have tears in my eyes.
-iliana

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Aw. I am crying right now! That was the sweetest thing ever! Your an amazing author! 10/10

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OH *sobs* MY *sobs* GOD! this is so sad! i cant stop crying! this story is amazing, though!

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Hate it. Ok at the start, but then you started to go down hill. Hate it. Absoloutley Hate it.

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i cant beleve you wrote this! i started crying because now hermione will never coome back and her and ron were supposed to be together... she always knows what to do... what are they supposed to do now

Author's Response: Lmao, I'm laughing, your sitting right next to me and you keep throwing your arms in the air. You really think it's that good ? I don't know all the answers to that because I don't plan on continuing with this story. I would love to but then I might just ruin it. I'm glad you liked it (:

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OMGosh. I absolutely love this.
It's making me cry.
Seriously.

It really is brilliant.
10/10.

And I totally love that song. =]]

xxx

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Very nicely written - especially for a first fan fiction. I dont' normally like song based fan fics but yours was very good. I hope you write another.

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked my story. I might write another, not to sure about it though.

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Hi Narcissa
aww..poor Ron, really heart-breaking to read it but, i must say dat u really showed d picture of what would have happened if we would have lost one of the golden trio. Amazing, it was so nicely written with precise words. Overall, it turned out very good. well done!
-Aashna
PS: i like ur writing style, so will u please be kind enough to comment on my recent story, i wud just like to know ur thoughts about it.
The story is called 'Forever As One'

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review, I'm glad you liked my story

I'm going to read your story right now. (:

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i have to say the truth...that was beautiful!! i loved omg i felt so bad for ron! especially that he told everything to her dead body! that was beautiful i almost cried!! 1000/10

Author's Response: Awe, thanks so much. I'm glad you enjoyed reading it (:

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I really liked what you wrote, especially the last line. It almost brought me to tears.

Author's Response: Thanks so much! :]

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