THIS IS REALLY GOOD, BUT YOU SHOULD HAVE MADE IT LONGER... EXPANDED THE STORY... IM LEFT CONFUSED... WHO DIED?HOW LONG HAVE THEY BEEN DEAD? IT STILL NEEDS WORK... BUT GOOD JOB THOUGH! Report Review
this story is the most beatiful thin gi have ever read i actually cried while reading it you r so talented ... im guessing her dead lover is harry or ron right Report Review
It's hannah here dear!
And woah! That was amazing, really. I loved it. You managed to perfectly capture their emotions while still leaving the reader, or at least me, wondering what had occurred to make everything revolve around the way it did. An air of mystery and intrigue, followed by a bit of romance is always wonderful ^_^ And you pulled it off perfectly.
Great job dear!
HannahAuthor's Response: I'm so glad you liked it hannah =D this is, in my opinion, the best songfic I've written ^^ Report Review
Hello, Desi, my love. Here with the review I promised. xD
Firstly, I want to say that I love the details you use. You are fantastic at setting a scene by adding in the little things, like the lights in the club, or the way her hand fit perfectly into his. Or the way you described her pain, and the entire last scene really. Every last bit you put in was brilliant, like the way Draco's features looked. GENIOUS.
The dialogue was great, too. I liked the way you made it so they didn't say very much, but what they did say was really important. You wove the lyrics in seemlessly, as well. The song really fit with the story, and I was really impressed with this.
The characterization was great as well, I really felt like that's how Hermione would have been, if she had lost both Ron and Harry like that. The way you added the background details was nice as well, like the bit about why H&R were killed. And then I was in love with the bit where Draco told Hermione they had healed each other, that was perfect.
The open ending was nice too, I think you left a lot of room for imagination there, but you also wrapped things up very neatly, if that makes any sense.
You get a 10/10 from me, my dear. You are a fantastic writer. xD
-ShaunaAuthor's Response: I love you shauna =P your reviews always make me feel a lot better. Report Review
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