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Review #1, by Kt But I Don't...

2nd December 2010:
Awesome I wish sev would have come to bad but this was awesome!:)

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Review #2, by kaileena_sands But I Don't...

2nd December 2010:
Hey! I think your story turned out great. First, I have to point out that I am the biggest fan of Lily/James (I am actually writing a fic about them now), but that doesn't mean I cannot appreciate a good-written AU Lily/Sev story. I think you did it perfectly :) Good work ;)

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I've had this story posted for awhile, but it was fun to go back and edit it recently! This story isn't anything like I've written. I don't particularly ship Lily/Sev or write in the Marauder Era very often, so I'm happy you've enjoyed it! Every comment is appreciated!

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Review #3, by kayla But I Don't...

5th April 2009:
i don't like it much i've got to say that i'm sorry but it wasn't what i like in a story esspecially a snape/lily story big fan of those not james/lily why not put lily and snape together but it was OK but thats it

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Review #4, by . But I Don't...

4th November 2008:
Aw! That was lovely and sad all at the same time. I like love the fact that Lily loved Snape and yet james still loved lily, knowing that her heart wasn't in their marriage, even tho he didnt know about the Snape thing. It brought a tear to my eye :) Kudos X

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Review #5, by shaunazombie But I Don't...

2nd November 2008:
Hello love, Shauna here with you review, I'm sorry it took so long.

Firstly, I want to tell you that this was amazing. The whole bit with Severus and Lily together was my favorite. I really liked how you wrote her character, actually, and the reason for her and James to get married, it was very well done and thought out. The tension between them was fantastic, and I was so sad for her with that bit about the engagement ring, so you've got emotions down very well.

I'm actually a really big fan of Severus/Lily, but I've never read a fanfic about it before, and you've got me hooked, this was fantastic. I love the way you used the secret it was really well done.

Thank you so much for entering my challenge, I'm adding this story to my favorites! Winners will be announced 2/14/09, so be sure to stop by then!

Thanks again, this was amazing.

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Review #6, by Wow But I Don't...

1st November 2008:
Different and yet, I couldn't look away! Can't wait to read more.

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