Hey - I meant to review this ages ago as my part of the deal :) :)
Great one-shot, just love the way you have used your song choice in the context of James and Lilly. with him chasing to get her.
The ending is also really sweet, with them getting together which was a great ending
Hope to read somemore of your fiction soon :)
Nic (blue_blooded_rose) :)Author's Response: No problem :) Thank you :) x Report Review
Aw! I love reading this!
Bunni_loverAuthor's Response: Aww ^.^ Thanks :) Report Review
oh this is sweet...:)Author's Response: Thank you :) Report Review
Loved it!!! Loved it!! Loved it!!! One of the best songfics I've ever read. And I have to admit I reallly love the song aswell!!!Author's Response: Thank you! Report Review
Very good work. I think it was well written.Author's Response: Thank you. Report Review
Awww! I liked it. You had a few typos and a few grammar mishaps, but other than that it was great. I liked the way you set it up. :D 9/10Author's Response: Thanks. I'll have a look over and try to fix the mistakes. Report Review
Terms of Service
categories & genres
short story collection