Wow. This almost totally changed my perspective of Snape. For the better. I know that he went through some rough times. But your writing really describes he was feeling and just made everything so much more real. Thanks for that!Author's Response: This was my first piece of Snape's feelings, I thought I'd challenge myself to write him as I never seem to be able to get him right. I was rather pleased with how this came out so I'm glad you like it.
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This story was so depressing. I'm a huge Lily/James shipper, but I always feel sorry for Snape just the same. You wrote the sadness that he felt over his friendship with Lily crumbling and disappearing very well. The descriptions were wonderful and made me picture what was happening clearly.
One minor thing: Lucius Malfoy was about five years OLDER than Harry's parents, the Marauders, and Snape. Other tahn that though, very well written.
9/10 =)Author's Response: Is he really?? I always thought that Lucius was in school the same time as Snape??
I really like Snape, but I find him difficult to write so I don't usually write him as a main character. I'm really pleased you enjoyed this & thought I did a good job with him. I always feelt sorry for Snape as well which is why I wanted to try my hand at writing him.
Thanks for the lovely review. & I have to ask at this point- update your story!!! lol. Report Review
this was beautiful. i thought that this was an absolutely amazing read. it was a nice realistic, cannon take on the unrequited love that Snape possessed for Lilly and i think that you pulled this off beyond anything in the words. you did a wonderful job with the characterization of Snape and it should definitely be something that you should not be worried about. wonderful job. this was a very pleasant and fulfilling read that i enjoyed very much.Author's Response: Oh thank you so much!! I'm really pleased that you thought Snape was well done, i read quite a few Snape centric fics & the writers seem to have a good handle on his character while I find him very difficult to write.
I really appreciate the lovely review and the positive comments! Thanks so much Report Review
Hi it's wytchkitty13 here at your request from the forums!
OH my! I really like this and you could just feel the story flow and Severus and Lily were so well characterized. It gave us a look at Severus and how he came to be cold and spiteful. It was written beautifully!! Good job on the feel of the story as it makes you feel bad for him and shows that he has a lot of pain and sadness which he puts up a thick wall to keep from showing it. This makes you believe that he is human, and it was well done!Author's Response: Thanks for taking the time read this for me. I'm reall pleased you thought I did a good job on the characterisations as I don't write either character really.
I feel that Snape did suffer a lot in his life and did hide behind a wall so I wanted to show that if I could.
Thanks so much for reviewing, I really appreciate the comments. Report Review
Fantastic, it really makes me see Severus in a different set of eyes :) I watched 'For Your Eyes Only' just las night XD so when I saw this I was like 'must read' haha, brilliant, I really love itAuthor's Response: Ha ha, what are the chances of you coming across this fic after watching the film?? ha ha.
I'm glad you enjoyed it, I'm not a big writer of dear old Snape, so I'm glad you enjoyed it. Report Review
wow! That was brilliant!! I feel so sorry for Severus, poor him =[ and I usualyl have this big huge hate thing going on whenever I read fics, and I dont usually read them about him. But I decided to give this one a try, and I am so happy that I did! It was sooo lovely and all the descriptions you put into it just pulls the reader in, so well done!!
I can see why he is so cold and hateful towards everyone now, because of Lily. I loved your characteristics of both Lily and Severus, they were spot on!
10/10!Author's Response: Thank you so much, I'm really pleased you liked it, especially as you're not usually a Snape fan! & don't write him very much as a central character so or Lily either so I'm really glad you thought I did ok with their characters!
Thanks for taking the time to reveiw! Report Review
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