This actually made me tear up. Not even joking. ;) Report Review
wow.. I actually cried while reading this.. and I don't cry easily. It was very moving, thank you :)Author's Response: Thank you :) Report Review
This is a beautiful story. You made the characters so real and captured my interest so well that I cared enough for them to be crying when Sean died, and especially when Ron was dying. I can't really describe it other than that you must have cared so much while you were writing it. I can definitely tell.
BlaireAuthor's Response: Thank you! This piece meant a lot to me, I'm glad you liked it. :) Report Review
It's celticbard from TGS' review exchange. ^_^ This one-shot was simply adorable...it made me feel all warm and fuzzy inside. Your study of Ron and Rose's relationship was so touching and, I believe, entirely realistic. What father doesn't struggle with letting his little go girl? I found it rather ironic (and bittersweet) that Rose was forced to let go of Ron at the end.
The only thing I would suggest taking another look at is the wedding scene. The placement of the flashbacks and flashforwards threw me off a bit. At times, I wasn't sure exactly when the scene was taking place and which characters were involved.
Otherwise, this story was wonderful. I really enjoyed reading it. I hope you have a great week! Take care!
celticbardAuthor's Response: Thank you hun! I appreciate the feedback. :) Report Review
wow, that was longer than i thought lol. but it was worth it! the only thing i would change would be when her husband died...she could have just fast forewarded to ron's funeral. i dunno ,the death was so sudden. i really liked the plot. the concept was really cute. that adorable little bike ;] ahah.
“Really? We didn’t get married for years after that.”
“Women just know these things.”
LOL ^ hermione is a defiant thing, isn't she XDAuthor's Response: Thank you! Report Review
My dear this was so amazing! Aww. So cute and so sweet! I loved it so much!
As always you never fail to amaze me and impress me beyond imagination! Congratulations, well done. *applauds*
10/10Author's Response: ILY too!! :D Thanks Drue, I'm glad you liked it. :) Report Review
Wow. This made me cry. Like I am still wiping away tears. Definatly one of the most touching peices I have read. It was really really bloody good. Going on my favorites.
xx.Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked it. :) Report Review
*wipes at eyes* wow..you really had me tearing up when i was reading this and that rarely happens to me.
This story was so good and I love the constant connections between past and present and the never letting go...it was brilliant. Really great job!Author's Response: Thanks! Not to sound happy that you're crying ;) but it's great to hear that my work is good enough to move someone to tears. I know I cried when I heard the song, before I even thought of this story. Report Review
this song must have been really good, because this piece is ah-mazing! i might listen to it, since it gave you SO much inspiration, anyway, great writing!-kelyAuthor's Response: Goodness, the song is amazing. The first time I heard it I was driving along and I thought 'Wow, what a cute song.' Then by the end of it I was crying so much I almost had to pull over! I've never felt so inspired by a song before. Report Review
Beautifully written, you are a evidently talented. It definently got to me at the end, the eulogy was very emotive. I look forward to reading more of your fics.Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing! I love hearing from my readers, and I'm so happy you liked it. I would love to have you read my other work, I've got a novel in the works, and a one shot awaiting validation. This piece meant a lot to me, thank you so much for reviewing. Report Review
You did a beautiful job in writing this. Good Job!
~Rockstar101Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing. I'm glad you liked it. Report Review
I love it!! It's really good...keep up the good work!Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked it, I enjoyed writing it. It's always nice to hear one's work is appreciated. Report Review
Very very very sweet - made my throat tight at the end - and the song/theme also reminded me of the song Butterfly Kisses. Beautifully written :) well done!Author's Response: Thank you for reading and thank you, thank you, thank you, for reviewing! Yes, I liked the theme it has in common with Butterfly Kisses, though that song had a decidedly less sad ending. :( Report Review
omg that was so good, i was getting teary eyed at the endAuthor's Response: Thank you for reading and for reviewing, I love hearing from readers! I'm glad you liked it so much, I enjoyed writing it. It is one of my more favorite works. Report Review
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