WHY DID YOU STOP? THIS IS SO UPSETTING BECAUSE THIS STORY IS BRILLIANT. Report Review
Ohhh, I read this story in one go and enjoyed it so much! And then I realised, that it is abandoned. It is such a lovely story. Maybe you are going to take it up again one day?!? That would be amazing! Report Review
Eep! Moments before she said it, I guessed it! Pregnant! Wow, great chapter! Please write more! *crosses fingers hoping for a quick update* =0D! Report Review
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I think you lerfectly captured the essence of a 5 year old with the sand in face and collecting shells XD XD! (except I still do the latter half.) Report Review
I love it when people stereotype blondes! It's hilarious! I guess I find it funny because everybody just assumes they're.well.blonde, and I know that not all of them are because my mum's a blonde and she's super clever. Great chapter btw (ps none of that was sarcastic I'm being genuine!) Report Review
' Seriously, what sort of person uses ‘no problemo’ in a normal conversation? And ‘yes, indeedio’?'
That, I think, sums up younger teenage boys perfectly XD Report Review
You are a truly great writer, with terrific characterizations and descriptions. I love the Scorp POV and his inner conflicts are portrayed very well. I too think it's sad that he ended up in Slytherin where obviously he does not belong according to the Hat which knows all. But he went where he wanted to go at the age he is. Report Review
What a pain!
I was REALLY enjoying this story...
I hope you'd reconsider it... Report Review
OMG! I love you story. Your Scorpius is my favorite Scorpius ever! Update soon! Report Review
I started reading this stor just a few hours ago and I just couldn't keep myself away from this. I'm sort-of addicted, I guess? Anyway, love the twist, with Grace and James especially. I initially thought that Albus will somehow be a dominant character here (seeing that they all are on the same grade) but he doesn't, and it's nice to focus on Scorpius more. Who would have thought that Astoria is actually pregnant? Well, I have actually before I read this chapter.
So anyway, thank you for the wonderful story and can't wait for more update, hopefully? :) Report Review
Ooft! This was wonderfully awkward xD I practically thrive on awkwardness, so thank you! Carmella trying it on with Rose was brilliant, I loved it. Also, the wacky combination of the ceremony was hilarious. Still not entirely sure as to why exactly Draco's there, but "love" does crazy things to you!
Anyway, I completely adore this story and the only thing I have left to say is that I can't wait for more!! Thank you, and well done!! ;DAuthor's Response: Thanks so much for all your reviews! I can't believe you took the time to do every chapter! You're too kind :) I'm so glad you like the story :D Report Review
I'm loving the whole Italian aspect - it's fantastico! Ellie is adorable and I like how Carmella is gay because it's such a brilliant twist! The POV change wasn't too confusing at all, don't worry. I also liked Draco showing up because I'm a sucker for a spot of drama :P So anyway, I loved it and on I go!! Report Review
I'm not really liking Bella in all honesty. I mean, I could stand her before but now she's messing badly with poor Scorpius and it's just bad >( I love this fic so much, though. Report Review
I love this so much. I know that I seem to be reiterating the same thing in every review but it's true! I genuinely adore thid, thank you :-) Report Review
I freaking love this so much. Actually. I. Love. It. Report Review
I loved this! It was just hilarious, I love Kelly xD Report Review
Everybody loves some good ol' cliches - after all, that's how they become cliche in the first place! So I definitely liked it, but I really just love Scorpius!! :D Report Review
Ooft, I genuinely love this story. Actually - it's fantastic. I adore Scorpius and the girlish manner in which he muses and (dare I say it) obsesses over Rose. It's fabulous, well done. I LOVE it!! :D Report Review
The time jump went incredibly smoothly and I really liked it. Everything seems very good so far and I just love Scorpius!! xD Report Review
This is just jubbly. Lovely jubbly. I love how, er, jubbly it is?
I'm sorry. I generally just fail, but I do LOVE this!! Report Review
Sque! I love this already. Scorpius is just one of my favourite next gen characters ever, and you do him brilliantly! I can't wait to read on :D Report Review
That made me laugh a bit. I cannot imagine a Malfoy saying something that I would imagine Tobias Funke to say :) Report Review
Wow, I love this story. It's witty and I've not read any good stories from Scorpius's POV ever haha Report Review
I love love love this story! Please update! Report Review
Ok, so this story ROCKS. Seriously.
This is incredibly well written. Your style is wonderful and the little remarks you come up with are SO FUNNY. I'm in stitches at simply the littlest things.
Scorpius is absolutely wonderful. He is so funny and likable and you just want everything to WORK OUT for him! But I have a feeling that's not going to happen for some time? Sigh. Poor Scorpy.
Draco absolutely breaks my heart. He still loves her and it's just all so sad!
And the Potter/Weasley's are brilliant. Especially Rose, methinks. She's so sweet and adorarable and I just want her to open her eyes and see that Scorpius rocks! That is, of course, if she hasn't already. Hint, hint, nudge, nudge.
LOVE it! Can't wait for the next chapter!
SquidAuthor's Response: Wow, THANK YOU!! You're too kind, seriously. But I've got the most insane grin on my face right now :D
So glad you like Scorpius :) I want everything to work out for him too! I hope it does. (I haven't quite decided yet because there are a couple of ways I might go, and I can't choose between them...) Poor Scorpy indeed :(
It is rather sad for Draco, but I'm not much of a Draco fan so I like to make things go badly for him xD Does that make me a bit evil? Probably x)
I'm SO relieved you like Rose! I was worried she might be a bit Mary Sue, but that's mainly because she's always seen from Scorp's POV and he thinks she's wonderful...
Thanks Squid! I'd say the next chapter should be up soon, but I'm a terrible updater so it probably won't xP I'm trying, though, I promise (*crosses fingers*) Report Review
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