Should of read this one first! Damn it I read Never Again Lazerus first, but now I've read both I understand the story a lot more, truely two amazing books :) two of the best I've read on here :) well done! An keep writing :)Author's Response: Ha, excellent! Glad you understand fully now! Bet you were really lost reading the sequel first! Thank you so much for your review! Very lovely of you to take the time. Report Review
i was just thnkng abt the young alan rickman in the barchester chronicles nd t fits u know
1000/10Author's Response: Mm... Alan Rickman in the Barchester Chronicles.
Glad you like the story! Thanks for the review... and the 1000/10 mark. Report Review
You're a very talented writer. :) Keep up the good work.Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you like this one and hope that you read on!
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Fantastic story. You're writing is superb and the story is top notch. I was exceedingly skeptical as to how well the story would hold together given the Snape/Hermione pairing. I must say it was done quite well and quite "believably." You've managed to capture the raw emotion that had to be attendant to this story line, and you've captured it expertly. Well done.Author's Response: Oooh thank you!
I'm so pleased that you have reviewed to tell me this, as I strive with all of my stories to get away from the dreaded cliche and steriotypical plots. I'm really that you think I managed to make the Snermione Pairing work, its my favourite pairing!
Thank you again! The sequel 'Never Again Lazerus' is up now too if you fancied taking a gander? Report Review
It has been a great read but I'm not sure if I want to read the sequel. The thing is, I thought this was a really good ending and I'm scared that the effect will be ruined. But really, you are a superwriter!Author's Response: Thank you! Thats okay, I understand. I'm just glad that you liked this story.
Thank you ever so much for all of your reviews, they have been really great to read. Feel free to check out some of my pother storys I'm currently uploading chapters for a new novel and there are a handful of one-shots too!
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This was the most breath-taking chapter ever!Author's Response: Thank you, i'm glad you think so! Report Review
I wonder why the grave was different for each of them?Author's Response: Hello there, sorry its taken me an age to reply.
Well I think limbo would be different for all of us, just as Harry ended up in Kings Cross at the end in the Deathly Hallows.
They all had different guides to show them the way, and the graves were filled with the elements of the world. Water, Fire and Air. And the graves were dug from the Earth.
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wow i can't wait to read the next the next book hope that i t was as good as this one thanks for the readAuthor's Response: Thank you so much! I'm so pleased that you enjoyed this one, and I hope the next story lives up to your expectations!
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I suppose it's okay but why the sword?Author's Response: I tried to think of the most visious thing that Harry could do to show the readers that just for a few minutes he could be just as sadistic as Draco, and the wand turning into a sword just seemed so symbolic. The Wand is a Wizards weapon, and his wand did literally turn into a weapon.
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I think my heart was beating as fast as Hermione's there!Author's Response: Thank you for telling me that! I love hearing how the story effects the readers like that, it really shows that its had an ipmact so thank you very much! Report Review
I have finally finished the story and it was great. Thank you so much for writing it! I'll start the sequel soon.Author's Response: THANK YOU so much for reading and reviewing like a true reviewing star! I'm so glad you have enjoyed this one, and I hope you enjoy the next one too! Report Review
Very emotional chapter. Was it hard to write? I guess it was hard for Snape to tell Harry about his love to Lily, but I'm glad that he had enough courage to tell it straight away, without trying to get away from the question.Author's Response: Urm, it wasn't particularly hard to write, this was one of the first chapters I had imagined in my head and therefore the hard part was trying to fit a story that would lead to this particuler moment, a bit odd I suppose, but ah well haha.
The Lily conversation was inevitable really, if there was physical evidence that Lily had once been in Severus's house then odds are that at some point Harry would find out.
And secrets in this story often rise out of their buried places. Thank you ever so much for all of these lovely reviews! Report Review
It is my favorite chapter, either. You created great tension. I only wonder who was guiding Harry, Hermione and Snape while they were kind of dead? Do they remember how they killed Voldy?Author's Response: Yes, they do remember how they killed him, I suppose they were in a kind of trance, with their literal power of sacrafice leading them by their joint wands.
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Well this is very lovely. Ron was so wise. Does everyone become wise in the heaven?Author's Response: Yes, I suppose they all get a little wiser after death. In this story, the 'afterlife' idea is that once you have died, your soul becomes part of the sky and they forever watch whats happening back on earth, I pretty much based the concept on D.H Lawrence's words 'the dead don't die, they look and help'
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Wow! Such an illusion. However, if the real Lily didn't come to Severus,it means he is not dying. :D
You did everything well. Now there is only such a small thing as bringing them all back to life.Author's Response: Well, that is to come haha.
Yes, you do find out who the person with the red hair and the green cloak really is in a few chapters time.
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Very well written chapter. Good job!Author's Response: Thank you! Report Review
I did not expect Harry to go from a complete jerk to a heartless murderer. He doesn't like the Order's style of dealing with Death Eaters I guess. I think that Draco is not the only one who should go to a psychiatrist. However, I liked the chapter. I like the insane Harry more than the hotheaded jerk he used to be.Author's Response: Yes, its pretty clear that he comes close to loosing his mind completely here!
I'm glad you liked it. Report Review
I haven't disappeared anywhere and I'm still reading your story. Unfortunately I don't have much time for reading as I have a lot to do and I am also finally uploading my story.
Hermione surprised me. I thought that it was going well, and she was trying to fool Voldemort that she believed him, but then she ruined everything. Is she really that impulsive? Voldemort is surely not the one who will forgive a slap.Author's Response: I think at this point, Hermione assumes she is going to die, and therefore her aim is to toy with Voldemort before he kills her.
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good job :) love it so farAuthor's Response: Thanks!
I'm really pleased this story caught your attention and you are enjoying! Report Review
Oh no. I never thought this would really happen.Author's Response: Yes, i'm afarid its happened, and there is still so much to come!
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Wow! I think Severus repeated the 'who could love you' thing too many times but wow nonetheless!Author's Response: Thank you! Report Review
I still hate him! I couldn't care less if he got killed!Author's Response: Woah... you really doo hate harry... but I don't really blame you, he is a nasty character in this story sometimes. Report Review
OMG I really despise Harry by now! Hermione doesn't need to apologise! She hasn't done anything wrong exactly; she has every right to love and be loved even if her former boyfriend is dead! I would shout back at Harry if I were in her place. I would tell him he is a... 'deep breath' Ahem. Sorry. I got a bit carried away there. lol.Author's Response: Yes, Harry is stuborn in this story, a trait from the books that I have played on and enhanced very much like his temper.
Haha, no need to apologise my dear, he does need a good strangle in this chapter. Report Review
Unlike most readers, I don't fancy sex scenes much and one of the things that I love about this fic is that it shows the characters' emotions perfectly without too much sex. It's brilliant! I would give you 12 out of 10 if I could!Author's Response: No, I don't really like them that much either, they make me cringe so much! So you won't really find much in the way of sex scenes in any of my storys haha.
Thank you so much, i'm glad you approve of the celibate elements haha. Report Review
What if it were better to end everything now and go back to his life of solitude.
This is probably what I would have seriously considered doing, but of course DOING it is much more difficult! Poor Seveus!Author's Response: Yes, its all so very dramatic isn't it?
If he had stuck to doing this in the first place, none of them would be in this situation. Report Review
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