oh i simply love it! :) its hilarious/cute/romantic all in one! definately my thing!
10/10Author's Response: haha all my stories are like that! At least I try to make them like that. thanks for the wonderful review :) Report Review
Wow. Just... wow.
That was umm, pretty damn good! So cute, but at the same time, so amazingly well written. It has a trickle of humor, bursts of romance, sparks of emotion and every inch of it is James and Lily to utter perfection. Admittedly, I actually got really worried for a little bit when James said no so forcefully. It was fairly scary, so you got a good reaction. One you were hoping for? Well, it worked, so well done. That shows good writing skills. (:
Well done on a fantastic little one shot, and I'm off to read another one of your stories. You've intrigued me! :)
MW xAuthor's Response: Awww thanks so much! This is actually my least favorite story I've written, but if i can recommend one of mine, my favorite i wrote is Similarities & Differences. Hopefully you'll like that one too. Thank you so much for the amazing review =) Report Review
aw!! it was charming! I loved it!Author's Response: Why thank you =) Report Review
I so love it! You're such a good writer!Author's Response: lol idk why i even wrote this one, i personally think it's my worst! thank you so much! Report Review
Sweet, hilarious, brilliant! Such a light hearted piece. I think it's charming and I love it.Author's Response: wow, aww thanks for the review =] Report Review
i really don't see the 'dark' part in it =S
i think it was more humour/romance =] lol
great chap!Author's Response: lol yeah, i guess you're right.
oh well, can't change it now.
thanks for the review =] Report Review
This is very cute! I liked the idea about the potatoes.Author's Response: lol thanks! idk i just think Marauders and food go together lol. Thanks for the review!! =] Report Review
What do u think of making a sequel? This is just an idea but I thought it would be cool so...um what do u think?^_^
Harry and GinnyAuthor's Response: lol thank you for liking it enough to think that i should make a sequel! haha but idk, i really wouldn't know what to write.
But i'll think about it! thank you for the rating and review =] Report Review
Hehe, I love potatoes...
-StarvingAuthor's Response: haha me too =) Thanks for the review =] Report Review
That was funny, and sweet.Author's Response: thanks for the review =] Report Review
*squeals* THAT IS SO GOOD!!Author's Response: aww for real? i thought it was a stupid little one-shot that wouldn't make sense! thanks so much =) btw, love the name haha. thanks for the review =] Report Review
:) Sweet, cool fluffy, what else??
Cool...Author's Response: thanks for the review =] Report Review
it was very cute n sweet .hope u write more stuff like disAuthor's Response: this was my fourth one-shot & my 5th one-shot is in validation right now! I'm glad you liked this one. thanks for the review =] Report Review
That was a cute one-shot.
I enjoyed itAuthor's Response: thanks for the review, i'm glad you liked it =] Report Review
I like how you used a little detail and broadened it into a story, though I think Lily's reaction was a little sudden and dramatic - it would flow a little more if you maybe wrote some of Lily's thoughts, thinking about how he's changed or something. Otherwise it's like she's just saying it do get her way. Though it was good that you had the line I say 'no' out of habit now that I'm so used to it. I just think a little more of that would make it flow more.
Cute little fic though, and I really loved the part in the tower especially!Author's Response: awww thanks for all the advice! Yeah, i get what you mean, but i wanted to try something different if you know what i mean. Idk i still have a lot to learn when it comes to fanfiction. Thanks again =) and thanks for the review =] Report Review
I want some patatoes now lol
Anywho love this one-shot it kept me laughing
It was also amazing writtenAuthor's Response: thank you so much! i have no clue why i wrote that it was just stuck in my head and it had to get out. I'm glad you liked it =) thanks for reviewing =] Report Review
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