Ok. I dont think you understand but this is one of the best fics I have ever read. Its just soo... GOOOD! And I found it 5 hours ago and I have been reading since then with no breaks. I know I havent been waiting as long as your other faithful readers but I'M BEGGING YOU! Please finish NOW! Or atleast update. Thanks. You really do have a gift. I've never really thought bout Dom as a charachter before.. she was just there. PLS UPDATE! Report Review
Please please hurry xx Report Review
alrighty then, here's your motivation. It's like 2 o'clock in the morning on a Sunday night, I don't even know how many months since you updated. I'm halfway relieved that I can go to bed accomplished (seriously, you know how it gets when you just HAVE to finish reading before you sleep), and halfway really irritated that your most recent update was in September I think and that I'm left with this. At least with the other stories I know how it ends! Grr!!! Anyways, Dom really just needs to get over herself a little, as much as she's fighting it, she's not gonna do better than a Hayes. Silly, silly girl :P So, Reviews=Happiness=Updates hopefully still applies. Come and prove to everyone that you still care about us!!! (or at least me, I honestly can't say if anyone else reads them, though they should) So, rambling begging persuading mode-deactivate. Over and outt to the supermegafoxyawesomehot writer HPsmartone32 wish you well, and hope to read you soon :) Report Review
ah.running out of chapters. D': and what da heck hayes? you better hope you aren't killed by a weasley... Report Review
ermahgersh...I really just love this story, and I love you for being awesome and giving me never ending reading material that I don't have to pay for or pick up at the library :) (though I guess that appreciation goes to hpfanfiction as a whole...but whatever) anyway, any time you feel like...you know, updating...feel free :)
yes, I'll wait Report Review
ugh i miss this story so badly. hopefully your writers block is gone. cause i really want to see this story have an ending Report Review
You will always have at least one reader m'dear! Me! This is a fantastic story and I can't believe I didn't find it until yesterday. Truly, I've spent the last two days reading straight through and finding millions of moments to laugh and scream and both teddy, Hayes, Dom, Fleur, Victoire, Dom, Teddy, Hayes, Dom, Dom, Teddy, Victoire, Dom, Dom, Dom. Wow, these characters aren't so great at expressing their feelings properly. But, I love them all the same. :)
Anywho, I feel entirely too guilty for not reviewing on any of the chapters up till this one and I am so eager to find out what happens next. What will her name be? Will she and Hayes be okay (PLEASE LET THEM BE)? Will Victoire finally forgive her (Come on, Vic. Get over it)?!? Will the rest of her pregnancy go well (there better not be any complications)?
So yeah. I have tons of questions that I am eager to find out and I really really really hope you update soon considering the last update for this story was in july... But no pressure, siriusly.
This story has just the right amount of plot twist, humor, drama, and romance that I have been sucked to the computer screen trying to get through it all. I was really really upset when I discovered that this was you last chapter so far and I can't believe that I've read through it all so quickly. I also adore how you've changed the traditional cliche of calling dominique 'nique instead of dom. Truly original.
So...there you have it. My review. I'm sorry for the length, but I tend to write obscenely long reviews.
10/10 and added to my favorites m'dear! Keep up the fantastic work and please update soon! Report Review
I thought that guy was visiting a friend? Good story 'cept for the plotholes. Report Review
omg you NEED to upload the next chapter. its too much suspence!!! Report Review
another awesome chapter!
it was a bit filler-y but it worked :D
great job, can't wait for the next one
Peaches Report Review
I first started reading this story quite a while ago And I really love it, but I really want you to update so I can find out what happens next. I don't know why I'm writing this now, but the story popped into my head and I wanted to check and see if it was updated and I just missed it. Unfortunatly it was not. but please update soon :) Report Review
I love this story! I first started reading it months upon months ago (if not more), but gave up since you weren't updating it. And I was pretty surprised when I saw this again, but I reread it and decided this has to be one of my favorites I read in a while! I look forward to reading the next chapter and I hope it gets up sooner rather than later because I really want to know what Teddy will say and how Dom will handle taking care of David. Plus, there is the whole Hayes issue...keep on writing and dont let writers block get you!!! PS-your french was slightly off before when Fleur was talking. It should be ma cherie (with the accent) not mon cheri because Dom is a girl Report Review
Keep at it! I really like the story thus far, and can't wait to see more of it! Soon please! :) Report Review
Good chapter as always! I glad that you updated!
10/10 Report Review
About time you updated!! I've been waiting so long. I'm so happy that you finally did though and I hope you won't take so long this time. I'm sad about Hayes and Victoire is just being so ugh. Anyway, loved the chapter and I can't wait to see what you have in store for Teddy and Dom. 10/10 Report Review
what i really dont understand is why victoire is with teddy still? talk about trust issues going to be in their marriage! ok i understand at some point ( even those r not so soon) u can forgive but these things cant be forgotten, this is going to be one hell of a disaster if they got married! victoire should call off marriage and give time to herslf or she will regret all her life. Report Review
I read this ages ago, and I just read Along Came Sirius and Tempting Fate today (Yes, all in one day, it was just that good, but don't flatter yourself! :P) and when I looked on your Author's Page I nearly freaked when I realized they were both by you! Anyways, this is really awesome story, and please update soon. And also, PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update Tempting Fate soon. I love Sirius and Adara and the cliffie you left me with nearly made me cry! You should be ashamed of yourself! :P
~Parvati Report Review
ahh I DESPISE Hayes! It's not even the wife/son thing, it's the way he just does whatever like when he introduced himself to Victiore on Halloween even though he shouldn't have and how he stayed there when Dom's mom came, like that's a private moment get out!! and then he says oh sure we'll go to the Christmas Eve thing, firstly she didn't want to go secondly the invite wasn't for him! He just annoys me because I had an ex-boyfriend like that who always just took initiative when he shouldn't -_- it's not about what's best for her overall it's about knowing your place! With that rant over, LOVE your story :) 10/10 Report Review
Oh poop. I really love this story. And I'm really looking forward to the next one. Dominique trying to take care of David should be either really funny, or super aw. Anyway, I love this story. I could say it more times, but I think you get the point. :) Report Review
No. No. No. No. No. Teddy and Domonique CANNOT be together. EVER! For the record, though, the fact that I'm this angry about two characters, means that you are doing a fantastic job! It's such a good read. One suggestion for you would be to make sure that you're staying in the same tense(past or present) the entire time. Report Review
I can't believe she did that for Teddy! What a horrible, horrible man! Dominique has grown up so much, but Teddy is apparently still a little child trying to get rid of his responsibilities. Report Review
This is so cute! But it makes me wonder why Emmelyn can't be stunned properly right now. I do love a mystery :) Report Review
Wow. Ok this is my review for every chapter! I read it all last night around 2am. This is the first story I stayed up all night to read but you had me hooked! I love how detailed and how much depth this story has! I was slightly fustraited with Victories fast exits but it gets me more hooked I guees. I just want them to be friends again she forgave Teddy when he was in the same situqatuion. I know she's her sister and all but Teddy is her fiance and dahhh. The whole childhood thing wow fits perfectly it probably makes it more touchy and damn this is amazing! Ok if you read all that wow if not still amazing! Sorry for any spelling/typos I write fast. Report Review
Ohmygod you actually updated. I had given up. I thought you had abandoned it. I was shocked when I saw the little number 22 there. Dkfnakspegrifhe it's 3am and I have to work tomorrow morning so I'll review as a guest tomorrow when I'm not so dead tired. I just had to read it once I saw there was a new chapter, and then it was long. So if I fall asleep at work tomorrow, I'm blaming you.
Thank you for updating!! Report Review
k, she needs to forgive hayes. seriously.
and teddy is being so obnoxious! he shud be helping with the baby way more. Report Review
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