That was so beautiful! I had tears in my eyes while reading this... Ypur writing-style is great!Author's Response: Awh, thank you so much :) that means so much to me, and I am so very glad you liked it ! Report Review
sweet, sad but sweet. i really enjoyed it. good jobAuthor's Response: Thank you so much =) And I am so very glad you enjoyed it. Report Review
It was amazing, I loved it.Author's Response: Oh, thank you so much :) Report Review
That's all I can say.
Well, actually, I can say more.
First off, I just want to say something really quick and I don't want to sound negative: There were a couple punctuational errors; I'd suggest a beta. (I'll do it, if you want me to; it'll be really easy.)
Ok, now on the the positive. It was beautiful. I mean I felt really sad when she was begging him to be on her side, when everyone was cheering and his blood was covering her hands. It almost made me cry.
So, I'm off to read your other two stories, and I'll see if you're at the Fourms, cause I've definitely got some questions.
10/10, without a doubt.Author's Response: Oh! Is it really that good? Thank you so much! This really made me smile.
Id love if you could beta it my email is Heartsthentears [at] gmail [dot] com
And you can ask any questions by email if you like.
Thank you so much for all the compliments! Im super happy now! Haha, but seriously I am.
And thanks for the ten :] Report Review
This is really good, I'm on the verge of tears. You've written their relationship really well.Author's Response: Im Really Glad You Like It. Thanks For The Review! Report Review
Wow, that's heart-touching. I loved it. At first I was confused, because you wen back in time, but once you finish, it all makes perfect sense. I'm adding to favs. 10/10!!
~AshHa~Author's Response: Thank You So Much For The Review! And Im Glad You Liked It :D Report Review
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