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6 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Amanda

10th February 2010:

You used good imagery. I was able to picture the settin better.

Author's Response: Thank you so much!

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Review #2, by McH

An Evening Broomstick Ride

1st August 2009:

That was so cute. Love it!

Author's Response: Aw thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it. :D

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Review #3, by harrylilyjames

An Evening Broomstick Ride

30th June 2009:

awe, cuteness!
But you said about the wind blowing his hair twice, might want to take one of those out and why did they go to the pitch?
Wouldn't it be quicker to just go to a place where people couldn't see them and take off from there?
It was still cute, I love Lily and James, they were perfect.

Author's Response: haha thank you so much! I\\\'m glad you like it! And yeahh, I wrote this a LONG time ago, so i wouldn\\\'t be surprised if i repeated some descriptions and whatnot.

Thanks for the review!

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Review #4, by MarcuslovesAido

An Evening Broomstick Ride

6th June 2009:

aww its so cute!!! Keep writing plz...cant wait for the next chapter!!!
-nina Cauzovic

Author's Response: aw thanks! I'm glad you like it! But this is only a small one shot. :( I won't be continuing this.

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Review #5, by Rosalie Beckett

An Evening Broomstick Ride

4th June 2009:

I love that you write such happy stories. =] they always make me smile.

Author's Response: aw thank you! Reviews make me so happy! lol. :D

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Review #6, by Dilys Derwent

An Evening Broomstick Ride

28th October 2008:

short and sweet. very prettyful. i really liked it.
Dilys :)

Author's Response: Thank you! It means a lot!

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