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Review #1, by Anna_Black Hide And Seek Isnt Just A Game For Children.

12th February 2009:
Hmmm... this chapter was kinda slow, but I guess it is only an introduction to the following chapters ;).

As you know, I love Salazar's parts, and I am glad that you got a bit inside his head towards the beginning, and even the fact that he didn't want war at first. I guess that doesn't make him a complete villain, does it? Ah well, I am still hoping he will see the error in his ways.

BUT him being evil so fun, so I hope even more that if he sees the error in his ways, he'll do that much later lol.

So, now I am having this brainstorm: what if Salazar kidnaps Scarlet? Mwahaha

lol

Evilness all around :D

Can't wait for the next update!

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Review #2, by thegeneralofmusic@yahoo.ca Meetings and Marriage.

4th January 2009:
I liked the story. I hope there is more.

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Review #3, by Anna_Black Meetings and Marriage.

23rd December 2008:
An update! *jumps around excitedly*

A great chapter - no arguing there :D. So, more of Salazar? I just love his parts, you write him so well! He seems so in character, just like I imagine him to be. Arrogant, cold and cruel. Hmmm... does that make him too evil? Ah well, he is Salazar Slytherin after all.

And poor Freya! She has to marry someone she has not known and have his child? *gasp* Well, at least Edward seems like a good person. So, he has been told about the plan, but Freya has been kept in the dark... why is that? Or, maybe it will be revealed in the next chapters?

I must say I don't like Rowena. She is so... rigid! I prefer Helga and Godric, of course ;).

When is the next update? *is hopeful*

Author's Response: Hahah, yesss, indeed. =D

Why thank you! (: Oh yes, much more - I have many things planned for him. Thank you; I actually find it quite hard to write him, so thats very encouraging! Ahh, now... his evilness; there is going to be a little insight into all that in one of the following chapters (unless I change my mind which I dont think I shall)

Oh I dont like Rowena either... Thats why she's so awful, hahaha. I shouldnt let my feelings against Founders control my writing.

Soon, hopefully! I'm currently writing a few chapters of different stories at once, so I'm not too sure.


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Review #4, by Anna_Black The Rider's.

19th November 2008:
This was so fast paced I had to stop myself from scrying down to see how it ends! I must say I resisted the temptation lol!

The beginning was Salazar was so compelling. I could picture the room, the wizards gathered around the table (they were wizards, right?), and finally - Salazar's powerful appearance in the room. I love your writing. It is so informative and rich. :D

I also really liked the second part with the Riders. So, it was them who were chasing Edward... ok, makes sense. I wonder how will Salazar react, though :P.

I can't wait to read more about Salazar - his part is so cool! I love him! I don't think I should, though, cause he is evil but there you go... haha

Author's Response: Hahaha, I'm glad you liked it! I actually thought this chapter was rather boring...

A majority of them were Wizards but some were Elves, etc.
Why thank you. (:

I'm really glad it make sense, it would make things complicated otherwise, lol. Dont we all?

I love Salazar too - I have a thing for Slytherin bad boy's, I'm not sure why.

Thank you for reviewing, again!

xxx


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Review #5, by Anna_Black Secrets Must Be Kept Secret.

11th November 2008:
Intriguing... I like it! This chapter had a slower pace but was just as good as the first one. I especially liked the way you described the relation between Freya and Scarlet, the way Scarlet was to make Freya believe her everything she said. But Scarlet's questioning at the end about the whole plan they had kept secret from Freya makes me wonder if she'll eventually give up and tell Freya everything. That would be a nice twist! haha

And I already like Edward. He seems brave and a good character but I guess we'll see that in later chapters. He is a Man, right?

So, if the whole pact is honoured, as in, Men, (Wizards?), Elves and Dwarves unite, I wonder how will that happen, what with the dispute between the Elves and the Dwarves, lol!

I am also very curious about Salazar as he is the only Founder that hasn't appeared yet.

Well, this is a really interesting story and I think it is really sad that you have so few reviews here. This has a lot of potential: the story line, the naration... everything fits so well!

This is going to my favourites and can't wait for an update! :D

Author's Response: Why thank you. (:

Yes, it would make a nice twist wouldnt it? But, who knows.. Scarlet could tell Freya and be too late to change things or she could tell her and set everything into chaos. ;)

Yes, Edward's a Man. A lovely lovely lovely man in my opinion.

Salazar will play a bigger part in later chapters. Right now, explaining everything with Freya, Scarlet and the Founders is quite important.

Thank you! Oh yes.. Few reviews do sadden me but hey, haha.

:o Wow! Thank you!


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Review #6, by Anna_Black The Beginning.

11th November 2008:
Oh. My. God.

I am speechless! This is so good! I'd better not start telling you how amazing this is cause I won't make it justice, but I'll try!! ;)

Ok, first: the description of the dress and the clothes in general was so good! You really have a hang for descriptions, I really love them! They get you in the mood so much!

Then, the whole encounter with the Founders was nicely conveyed and I could easily picture everything that was going on very easily.

And the final scene with Edward and the rest was very tense which I absolutely loved! It was fast-paced, but just to right amount to keep the reader alert for every single detail!

I think you've picked a really good time of the Founders' story to start. You immediately pull the reader in the plot and it's character and in a very clear and not confusing way, and I congratulate you for that! Plus, the idea about incorporating the Elves and other LotR's creatures is very well thought out.

I can't say more since this is the beginning, but it is an amazing and extremely promissing beginning.

Am off to read the next chapter!! :D

Author's Response: Ohmygod. I LOVE YOU. hahaha. seriously.

Thank you! Descriptions means alot to me. I hate when you find stories with little or no description of the clothing, so you have to use your imagination for that. And I just had exactly what she would look like and wear in my head, I just HAD to right them down.

Really? Wow. Thank you! Haha. Thats exactly what I was going for.

Again, thank you. (I really do love you.)

I will love you forever. Really. This review has made me really happy! :D



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Review #7, by Spicky The Beginning.

9th November 2008:
Thats good!!!
although i kept getting confused when you switched between calling her vix, freya and scarlett, was it on purpose?
i wonder why no one else has reviewed, this is quite good.
:-)
xxx

Author's Response: oh dear. D: no, i didnt, hahaha. her name was originally Scarlet but then I changed it to Freya. I apologise for that, I really need to change it.

Thank you. (:


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