WOW amazing end, such a beautiful story (:

Author's Response: Awww thanks!! God, I didn't think people were actually still reading this! Hahaha. Thanks for the review!

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I really loved this chapter. It makes you want toread more!

Author's Response: Awww thanks so much!!! ^^

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I just want to say that i LOVE this story. Its so well written and i love all the characters. They are just as i imagined them to be. I also love the sarcasm in the story that the characters use!
love it!
Sierra

Author's Response: Oh my god! Thank you so much! ^^

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hahaha i loved this story and cant wait to read the sequel yayayayaya :)

Author's Response: yayy! thanks for the review!

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I just know that when Sirius went into hiding and he sent Harry that colorful bird, he was visiting Tori and Freddie. That makes me feel like they got a piece of heaven for a while

Author's Response: Teehee...yeah...I wanted to make it so that when Sirius went into hiding that he went to see Tori and Freddie. Because that seemed like the most logical idea. Lol. Thanks so much for the review!!

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I'm sorry. i didn't review b4, but i was really caught up in the story. I love it. You are brilliant! :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much!!!

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I love your author's note by the way.
I definitely enjoyed the way you ended it. You make Tori sound so evil. I can almost imagine a devilish smirk as she's saying that last line. Absolutely wonderful.
Great way of introducing something in a later chapter and bringing it up again, just like Rowling with all those little hints. :)

Author's Response: OMG Thank you so much!! XD

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Hey TwoWayMirror! I decided to read your story again and it's as great as ever! This was like, the only chapter that I didn't leave a review for already Lol. So I finally figured out how to upload a new story (stupid double returns. :(ha) so thank you for inspiring me! New story waiting to be validated and I uploaded it because of you! Thanks, 1,000,000,000/10 stars!

Author's Response: Aw...thanks so much!

I always enjoy hearing from you!! I'm glad I inspired you! And I'm hoping to update the sequal but school has been completely ridiculous and my comp is deciding to be a little bitch...so hopefully I can get some updates going! Hopefully!

I can't wait to read your story!!! I just need to find the time. I have to head to AP Theory now, (still at school ^^) Hope to review soon!!

-TwoWayMirror

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Hello. :) I am just trying to finish my first chapter of a sirius/OC story so i am reading a couple, mine is going to be based of the song Trouble by nevershoutnever (you should hear it if you haven't it is a great song) I wanted to let oyu know, that so far i like the story. I think it is interesting. :] WEll i am going to continue reading. I think it is always nice to leave a review if i have time, so here you go,.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review...I quite enjoy them...lul

I hope your story goes well, I'm sure I've heard Trouble, it does sound familiar...I'll look it up when I get the chance...

Thank you again for reviewing!! Enjoy the rest of the story!

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this literally made me laugh out loud. don't worry, i mean at the funny parts, ahah. but yeah it's a great story and the fact that it's actually humorous makes it that much better! btw, could you possibly read&review my fanfic?

Author's Response: THANK YOU SO MUCH!!

my computer is broken...(i'm in math right now...we're supposed to be writing a paper) but I'll try to get on when i have more time so I can read yours! AND I PROMISE I WILL!!!

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Oh wow, it's AMAZING! Gonna go read the sequel now!

Author's Response: Oh thanks so much! Please read!!

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Wow, it's awesome!
Moving on now...

Author's Response: lol thanks so much for the review!!!

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omg i re-read your story and it almost made me cry! gosh i love it so much!!! i've decided what my story will be called and what it's about. it's going to be called 'sweet like honea' PLEASE r/r! i will be so happy but i'm waiting to get it up. please don't get angry if you see some of your story in mine.your story is just the best and when i'm trying to think of what to write, i always think, what would twowaymirror put? lol i would never have thought of writing a story if i hadn't read yours. it may be a little bit the same at some parts but never exactly! omg i just finished re-reading this but came back here so i could review. i remember when this story only had 2 reviews. *sighs* good times. good times... omg you HAVE to write more! your the best! 100/10 -its_complicated

Author's Response: Oh thank you sooo much!
I will read your story the next time I get a chance too! I feel so special! hahaha. I can't believe you like this story so much! Thank you so much!!

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hey, cant believe its finished!!looking 4ward 2 reading the sequel!!

Author's Response: Hehe I know! Thanks for reading!!!

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awesome kiss scene!!sirius rocks!!lol - well dun on a gr8 chapter!!

Author's Response: Thanks dearly!!!

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hey, awesome story so far, ime hoping 2 finish it by the end of the day - i love ur story line and the james and lily part,lol, - cant wait for the xmas ball!!thanks for a brill story!!x

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loving it so far ;-)

Author's Response: Yay!
Thanks a bunch for the review!

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it's amazing! i love it. she's got such an amazing character!

Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Keep reading!
Keep reviewing!
And don't forget to check out the sequel!!!
Thanks again for the comment!

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I Love this story! Kept me entertained on a rainy afternoon :)

I love your style of writing.. and even though i don't really know james or lily's characters amazingly well.. the way you wrote them is just like how i imagined them :) Same with remus and sirius :)

WELL DONE!!!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! Lol


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This chapter was a bit sad but I loved the rest of it, you are a fantastic fan-fic writer! Plus I'm really really into Sirius Black and Remus Lupin at the moment.

Author's Response: Sirius Black is by far my favorite character!
And you really think I'm that good?

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hey! the ending was so sad! with lily and james dead. and terri and remus not together, and with sirius MIA, aaah!
i can't wait to read the sequel!!!

Author's Response: Lol!
I know the ending is really sad. I cried while writing it and when I re-read it my eyes get all watery and it's just--yeah
Yes, read the sequel! Comment on it and what not! Lol
Thanks for reading and reviewing! It really is appreciated!!

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This was really good!

Author's Response: Oh, thank you so much!

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I'm excited for the sequel!

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that was great. i really enjoyed it. i think you got sirius's and lupin's character perfect. That was really uplifting and touching. really great.

Author's Response: Oh! Thanks sooo much! Lol
Keep an eye out for the sequel; There's Love, There's Loss, There's Laughs

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