Eh. It was a great story, don't get me wrong, but I was just kinda bleh about the ending. I really think that if Harry woke and found out that Hermione had made him a Horcrux, he would have lost it about becoming an abomination like V. I honestly can't see him letting her off the hook and getting back together like that but good story anyway.

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Freakin' hilarious. That description of sex as Quidditch made me chuckle.

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wow, just wow. very nice. nice twist at the end with the burst of energy and the horcrux.

Perfect ending: "knowing that for them, words would never be enough."

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That is just amazing. It's absolutely beautiful. Seriously. I don't know what more I can say. Thank you for sharing your talent.

Author's Response: Thank you. I'm flattered that you felt so strongly about it. I guess I have to think about that marriage proposal in the other review now, don't I? ;-)

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this and your last one has been a very good story so far but i have one major question that bugs me about these stories. Surely Lily and hermione would be more closer to the harry they have grown up with and in lily's case raised rather than this new harry. Also what has happened to the other harry we haven't heard from him since st mungo's in the original story

Author's Response: Yes, they would be closer to him. Dealing with the changes is an issue for both Lily and Hermione that is addressed throughout the story. As for where the other Harry is, he is still recovering in St. Mungo's and you'll find out what happens to him in the next chapter.

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Thanks for writing a cool story as I enjoyed reading it.

Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing.

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wow they worked together and were able to get back together. 10-10

Author's Response: Thanks. Glad you enjoyed it.

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Excellent idea and are Harry and Neville alive? Please write more thanks.

Author's Response: Actually, all three of them died at the end.

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Awesome idea and please update soon thanks as I am enjoying the story.

Author's Response: Glad you're enjoying it. Thanks for reading.

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oh wow what a clifie, can't wait for more.

Author's Response: Thanks for reading.

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Yeah hey so pleased to find this sequel! I had to start it straight away to see if Harry stayed around. Really have to leave it here though as I have so much I should be doing! Love the prophecy working for the two of them, I will come back to it - can't wait!
CA x

Author's Response: Life is more important than fanfics? I didn't know that was possible!

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ohh i hope they are able to get to him in time

Author's Response: It's unfortunate, but that isn't always the case. Makes things interesting, though.

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I'll admit, I haven't read this yet (I will! I promise!) but I have to say that your banner is particularly amusing.

Author's Response: I thought it suited the story. :-)

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but she still thinks only he has to die but its both of them, i can't wait to read the next chapter. i hope the rescue is in it and i can't wait to read their reaction to finding draco all tied up.

Author's Response: Bellatrix will learn more if she really pushes - and she will. Draco will eventually regret not telling his aunt anything.

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Hi. I have read both of you stories and they are pretty good. I like the AU twist.

Author's Response: Thanks. I'm glad you like it.

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Oh wonderful chapter! I keep leaving reviews for you but for some reason they are not showing up.I hope this one does! I anxiously await your next chapter!

Author's Response: Sorry you haven't been able to get anything through before. Thanks for reviewing this one. ;-)

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i still think he is holding something back and he is not fully on their side.

Author's Response: Which one, Dumbledore or Draco?

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ohh looks like somebody's introuble. i hope you are able to have neville and harry figure out how to defeat him before harry goes back to his own timeline.

Author's Response: Yeah, Draco doesn't know what he's playing with.

Harry isn't exactly planning to go back. Thanks for your input.

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I really like the concept of this story! Harry & Neville having to work together. I read Free will and Fate yesterday, I couldn't stop reading it, I was up until 3:30am. Just thought you'd like to know.

Author's Response: Yes, I am glad to know that. ;-)

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WOHO!!! A sequel! Just one question, is the other Harry dead? You really left his far ambiguous...

10/10.

Author's Response: He's still around for now. You'll find out what happens to him in a later chapter.

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loved it :) i'm so glad you decided to create a sequal and i loved the other story too can't wait for the next chapter :)

Author's Response: Thanks. I'm glad you're enjoying it so far.

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