ummm...pretty good...though the ending is really perfect-very beautiful!Author's Response: Thanks so much! Report Review
Aww, a story behind the radishes! How sweet!Author's Response: Hehe I had to get some canon plot point in there, and we never knew Luna before GoF so it works! Report Review
I think you completely captured Luna there, her dreaminess but on another level she really wants to fit in and I like Theodore! We never heard much about him, but I'm writing a story about him at the minute and now I love him so I'm glad to see he's being represented in ff.
I also love your explanation for the radish earrings and your writing was very good too-lovely descriptionsAuthor's Response: Thank you so much for such a sweet review!
Yeah for my friend's birthday, she requested the pairing and I had a little bit of experience with her so I granted her wish and it turned out better than I thought!
And YES the radish earrings! I put a bit of canon in there. After all, we don't know what they were up to at the ball nor do we know where she got the earrings...
Thanks again! :-D Report Review
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