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Review #1, by Joanne K Prologue

25th October 2008:
Good opening chapter. This prologue gives enough information for the reader to know what is happening without giving everything away. It works as a great lead in to your main story. You use imagery well. My main criticism is that you seem to randomly use capital letters in the middle of your sentences sometimes.

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Review #2, by marinahill Prologue

25th October 2008:
this was a nice prologue - it set the atmosphere effectively and I liked the use of foreshadowing.

Be wary of spelling mistakes like 'gaurds' instead of 'guards'

A well thought out chapter :)

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