i am happy that everyone was there for each other, and malfoy got what was coming to him, cant wait to read what happens next.Author's Response: Ooh! Thanks! I'll have the next chapter up as soon as possible! Just keep reading! Report Review
Hey! I decided to check out some of your stories cus you were so nice reviewing my Hide and Seek :) I really like this one, it's such a great idea have Jacob/Ginny they'd be so perfect. God they're kids would be goodlooking haha :P Btw my Hide and Seek chapter three is up (hint hint) haha, anyways great work! xxAuthor's Response: hehe oh! thanks! I'll go right now and read it! sorry if my reviews sound reapeated.I just don't know what else to say! haha anyway, i really like Jacob and Ginny together.I wish there were more stories with them. Report Review
I love how this is not your typical twilight cross over.Author's Response: wow...this is the first review for this story i have gotten in quite awhile! hahaha and thanks! please continue reading! Report Review
Jordan! Hey! Great Chapter! Anyway, I have a question, do you want me to BETA your story? You know, E-mail it to me and I'll get rid of all the pesky typos and such and E-mail it back to you and you can post it? Just wondering! Haha. It might get those people with "there's these typos" off of your back! Hahaha. Anyway, I can't wait to read your Mione/Edward fic. You're going to put it on here right?
Anyway, that's all,
hermione_jane45Author's Response: NO DEFINATELY NOT PUTTING THAT ONE UP! hahahaha not really hahaha and most of my typos are where i switch letters anyway and i could care less hahahaha Report Review
Oh no, cliffhanger--ARGH, you, you EVil cliffhanger writing author type person you! Shame on you! You got us panting and drooling, dying for more, but then you don't update for TWO MONTHS. That's it...I sentence you to time spent in the dreaded ... "comfy chair"! Or 20 lashes with a wet noodle--whichever strikes more fear in you --Muhahahaha!
Oh man, please don't tell me that this story has been abandoned! It hasn't been updated in awhile. :(
PLEASE, PLEASe, PLEAse, PLEase, PLease, Please, please update soon!Author's Response: my computer crashed! im very sorry!!! its not my fault! i really will update soon! very very sorry! Report Review
I like this story a lot! Please update as soon as you can.Author's Response: thanks! i just got another computer so ill try to get sum chapters up soon Report Review
wow what a different unique story! it was greatAuthor's Response: thanks hahaha i am glad you liked it!!! Report Review
OMG!!! Ok your writing skills have improved soo much!!! I'm really liking this story!!! There are still some spelling mistakes, but its all just swapping letters. I'm really looking forward to an update, so do one soon! 10/10
~AuroraAuthor's Response: thanks for sticking with me and the spelling hahaha i have always had problems with that hahaha idk why haha thanks again!! i am glad you like it!!! Report Review
Wow, awesome chapter! A few typos here and there but that's not a problem at all. I myself am the queen of typos, lol. And aw, poor Jacob! It must be tough trying to find your way around a school as big as Hogwarts! This story is getting interesting and I'm excited to see what happens next! Keep up the great work! :)
Keep it jazzy,
DJjazzyCarltonAuthor's Response: haha thanks haha i am not the best typer so.hahaha i am sorry for the wait i am a bit lazy hahaha keep reading!! hahaha Report Review
I think you have a great plotline but it doesn't make sense that Sam would be the one Jacob saw because Sam has already imprinted on...was her name Emily? Also, is this set before or after Stephenie's books? Or is it related at all other than the fact that Jacob is in the story along with the other shapeshifters.
Another reason it doesn't make sense that Sam would be in that situation is because he was (and might still be depending on the grounds of your plot) once the pack leader and he'd never do something like that to someone he cared for. He cares for Jacob along with the rest of the pack.
I'd suggest using any other member of the pack because Sam doesn't fit this profile. Come to think of it Paul fits it perfectly. I know he imprinted in the fourth book but it'd be an easy plot to set up that also make sense.
Sorry I'm rambling. Great Story only this chapter is a bit confusing because of the Sam thing. Report Review
Ooh! Great chapter! I love it! Really, great story Jordan! Wee! Love it! Always keep writing! LYLAS!
Jacok Black Cookies!Author's Response: thanks caitlin when i first read this i got scared that you knew my name but then i remembered who it was so haha i am writing no worries! and i love jacob black cookies
Really Great Plot needs a bit of editingAuthor's Response: thanks for the review! Report Review
Ok this chapter was much better with the details, but MAKE IT LONGER!!! It's really good! Write more! NOW! 9/10
~AuroraAuthor's Response: thanks for reading this chapter too! my next chapters are longer i promise but i'm not sure about the detail. i really hope you like the rest!
Yo dude! This is totally awesome. Ginny seems to dark and depressing. I can't believe you don't have the other chapters up yet. GOSH!!! If you have written the other chapters I totally have to read them. AHH!! I want to read it so bad now!! lol. It's really GOOD!! AWESOMENESS!
May the Nargles be with You,
Luna LovegoodAuthor's Response: hahaha yeah thanks for reading i still need to read your story though whats it's title? Report Review
I filled your request over at TDA for the banner you're using and I saw that you have put it up though failed to credit. Credit is a must. I'm glad you like it but could you please credit me?
anokasdollAuthor's Response: Yes. Sorry. I will credit! Def.
Wow, this was a great start to a very promising story! Jacob is pretty much awesome and I'm so thrilled that you're writing about him. I think you did a very good job on this first chapter: you introduced the characters and ended the chapter on a suspenseful note that makes me want to read further. But I agree with the review below: the only thing that could make this even better is adding in a bit more detail in certain places. Great job on this first chapter, sweetie, and I hope you'll update soon!
Keep it jazzy,
DJjazzyCarltonAuthor's Response: Thank you for comment i am very excited to see if you like the rest of my story...I will post the second chapter soon... Report Review
Ok well the chapter was good, but it coould use a lot more detail. I like the way the story is going though. Update soon.
ps 6/10Author's Response: Thanks for the review and thanks for the tip i will keep in mind. Thanks again! Report Review
OMC! I love this story! It alredy has me in suspence! Really, great plot line and everything! Great job! Keep up the good work! =D!
Love ya, Wolfy, don't hurt yourself phasing!,
P.S. Three Words...Jacob. Black. Cookies.Author's Response: thank you for your commenting on my story Caitlin it really made me excited now if i could just get a few more i will be really excited...Dude i am definetly going to make some jacob black cookies and bring them to the new years party! Report Review
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