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Review #1, by auror_snape Wedding Crashing 101

8th December 2008:
Oh yeah, you sure put my joke to good use! Good for Fred, too. And seven kids is more like it. 10/10

Author's Response: I actually wrestled with what the launch word would be for a while, and that scene had gone through a dozen incarnations, with several informants.

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Review #2, by auror_snape An Alternate Scenario...

30th October 2008:
So basically, if Robert's turned, everything goes down the drain. Where's Draino when you need it?

Author's Response: Pretty much. I mean, the only thing that really kept the Lycans from invading England was the Black Guard, and now that Voldemort has both the numbers of the Legions and the technology of the Guard, things go south pretty quickly.

The Draino was supposed to come in a couple chapters, which will probably be the next thing I post. After I post the next chapter of The Hogwarts Deception.


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Review #3, by auror_snape The Final War

27th October 2008:
It would have been murder to make that fit in with what you have. The prologue you already posted fits much better, as it gives more information on the Black Guard.

Author's Response: Tell me about it. That's why I changed it. This is actually the third revision, the original having the Guardsman, whom we later find out is indeed Robert, showing up at the Potter doorstep.

Next one is coming soon, since I'm too busy to touch up the Black Guard chapters right now. It's a small preview of what was supposed to go into Time Warped.


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