pretty good. ^_^ poor fletcher and hannah! :( a little short, maybe.
W. WardAuthor's Response: I aim to promote angst. Everything I write is short, I'm sorry. I've got the smallest attention span ever. Report Review
Awww, poor Hannah! I think you portrayed her emotions really well, and the whole thing was well written. I also really liked that he was her brother - it was just one of those 'I did NOT see that coming' moments.Author's Response: Oh, I do love those moments. Thanks! Report Review
This is really good! I feel like it ended a little too quickly, though. The end was just a bit rushed. He became her brother out of nowhere lol! But I still love it. Report Review
This was really well written, I've never read anything like it either. Your twist at the end was amazing-I was wondering how you were going to fit your summary into the story.
I think that the feelings and dialogue were very realistic too.
In short I loved it 10/10 =]Author's Response: Thank you much! To be honest, I wasn't all sure where that twist came from. I was just sitting there, thinking 'How can I make the end interesting, at all?' and it just kind of came to me. Thanks again. Report Review
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