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Review #1, by HG_HP_fan Owl Post? - Part 2

30th August 2010:
Will you ever post again and finish this delightful little tale? It is quite well written and I would love to see how it ends.

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Review #2, by gravacor Owl Post? - Part 2

10th January 2009:
Great update. I wonder what Harry has in mind. That was a good talk between Hermione and her Mom, in which I think that both know how the other feels and there are no questions. The sadness in which Hermione feels is horrible, hopefully this will be remedied soon

Author's Response: *sighs with relief* I was worried that Hermione might be completely OOC, suddenly changing from being depressed to understanding her mother, but I didn't know how to change it without Hermione either being completely happy about her situation or being unbelievably stubborn and petty. It's good to know that the talk between the two worked out all right.

Poor Hermione. :( But it seems that Harry might have a plan to change her mood...

Thanks very much for reviewing,

-Kelsey


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Review #3, by ActingwithStyle Owl Post? - Part 2

9th January 2009:
aawe, I love how you described the owl. made me wish i had one of my own.. lol, anyways great chapter hope to read more in time's future :)
10/10

Author's Response: Thanks :)
I saw that sweet little owl in my mind from the moment I thought of adding one, and I honestly sat at my computer with this big grin on my face because I could just see how adorable he was! Owl post would be so cool if we could really train owls to do it.

Thanks for the review, there should be more of 'Pretend' up soon!


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Review #4, by apAidan Owl Post?

28th November 2008:
miniature owl? could it be? And the plot thickens, as they say. It's going to be interesting to see exactly how long she (and Harry) puts up with this before one of them decides enough is enough.

Very good chapter, the scene between Hermione and Emma went very well, and Hermione listening to her folks was just excellent.

Looking forward to the next installment

Author's Response: *sighs with relief* Thank you for the feedback about Hermione and her parents; I was wondering if I'd made her too OOC by having her listen to them instead of staying with her friends, especially considering that they've never really been part of the plot before. Good to know that I haven't completely changed her character.

Thanks very much for reviewing,

-Kelsey


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Review #5, by chance Goodbyes

26th October 2008:
I was crying. seriously. and I can't wait to next chapter.

Author's Response: Sorry for making you cry! But I guess that means I write good angst, so thank you very much. :)

I'll try to get the next chapter up soon!

-Kelsey


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Review #6, by Lovehurtssoul Goodbyes

23rd October 2008:
Absolutely brilliant, love it! I thought that the whole teary goodbye thing was really good, and it seemed like Hermione's parents were the bad people in this. Really well written too, good technique.

Author's Response: *sighs with relief* I was unsure about the goodbyes, wondering if the two were OOC throughout the dialogue. Good to know that they weren't! Thanks for the kind words!

-Kelsey


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