I DID MY WAITING. TWELVE YEARS OF IT, IN AZKABAN!
>:( UPDATE PLEASSSE! :) x

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This chapter was probably one of my favourites.

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This chapter wasn't as good as the others. But it's really intense and I like that.

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Oh Sirius. You are such an idiot. I'm excited to read more.

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Ooh Sheldon is finally getting caught up! I feel bad for Sirius. Love this.

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Sirius is an idiot! But I love him. Very good writing.

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I think Sirius' point of view is one of the best you write. I also love how Sirius is so vain and considerate at the same time.

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It's so funny to see sirius jealous. He's so cute!

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I think this is terrific. Reading on

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This was so cute. I want Sirius and Hayley to be a couple so bad! It's very good.

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I really like this. The brother-sister relationship is really well thought out. It makes me laugh when James and Hayley bicker with each other. Good job!

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Story is good so far! Keep writing and then I'll keep reading
! I would like to have the 1st option in the chapter

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Hurry up and post something new chapters please Please PLease PLEASE!

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i know i reviewed this story ages ago, but i just reread it recently and you must write more!!! it's sooo good.

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okay. you need to and i seriously MEAN this. YOU NEED TO POST AGAIN. like TOMORROW! It's been since March! Gr.

However to answer your questions... I think for the next chapter you should do Christmas day then the following chapter Hogwarts... Jumping around to much always confuses the readers. By going to Christmas day for the next chapter THEN Hogwarts the following chapter it keeps the readers interested and wanting to keep reading :)

Oh and one more thing. Do you write on Microsoft word? If not you might want to because you have quite a few errors in grammar... Or you might want to reread your chapters before posting because you have the wrong words in places or you repeat things... Just trying to help, not trying to be rude. But other than the grammar errors and other mistakes, i love this story!

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The review on the last chapter was before i realized you have a couple more chapters after 18. My bad! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK

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You haven't posted since March of 2011. Seriously!?

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I heart this! Please update!

Author's Response: Working on it right now! Thank you!

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Number 1 ofc :)
Love your story, keep writing it!
Btw, please don't let James walk in on them if they're doing it :p

Author's Response: Thank you! Haha, I was thinking it! But I won't! :):)

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I chose number 1 PLEASE WRITE MORE!!! I love this story. I can't stop reading it

Author's Response: Thank you! xo

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number 1! excellent story!
~megan

Author's Response: Thank you :):) NUMBER ONE IT IS:):)

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I loved this. i KNEW there was another explanation!!! i think you should just go straight back to hogwarts but maybe with some flash backs to christmas day. 9/10 =]

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Love this story! The aftermath please. Upload quickly please! I can't handle this suspense!

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Love it!! :)
I love this story, and the characters. I feel like you truly captured how Sirius would act in this situation and I love it.
I would love to hear about the aftermath of the whole Haley/ Sirius sleeping together, and what happens Christmas day. :)

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I like option 1 (: Awesome chapter, I read the whole fanfic up to now in one sitting but it was worth it. I love it. I thought Hayley would be cheating on him, but I'm glad she's not. post soon! :)

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