The one thing that immediately stood out to me about this chapter were the number of spelling/punctuation/grammar mistakes that I found. You may want to consider getting a beta reader to review your chapters before posting them. Good luck, Voldy Needs a Hug Report Review
I haven't read the one you deleted because, believe it or not, I'm new to this site. But I liked this one. When are the next chapters coming?Author's Response: Sorry i haven't been on in a while, but the next chappie i'm posting today, so it should be up soon. I deleted the other one because i didn't like where the story was going. I'm glad you like it, thanks. Report Review
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