This was a very interesting take on the reasons behind "loony" Lovegood. Although it was short, I felt that there was enough in the story to make it a good story and any more would have taken away from the sentimental, personal aspect of it.
I really enjoyed it, well written!Author's Response: Thank you! I really appreciate your input. Report Review
Your faithful reader's back! This time for some genuine Luna frenzy.
Bless Luna, I love her and I love reading her unless paired up with Draco. A short but lovely, very much in-character piece, in the hard to master "stream of consciousness" style. You did a fairly good job capturing her essence, giving the explanation behind her mystery. The last paragraph was simply priceless.Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thank you so much! Report Review
This was a very charming little ditty. Luna's feelings were perfectly layed out and the Moss-tooth Wirerotes disease was an interesting twist. I think it was so sweet how Luna chose to follow her mother's footsteps.
Starved, Signing out.
P.S. Could I use the term Feather-freckled Pixie? With an author's note, of course stating the facts of not-mine-ness?Author's Response: I\\\'m glad you enjoyed it! Of course! I have no problem with you using the term. :) Thanks for your review! Report Review
Hi V! (I wont say your name to protect your identity:P)
this was really good! very detailed and plot :D I would've never expected this sort of thing behind Loony's wackiness.
the only constructive criticism I have for you is the beginning kinda drags. there's a little too much setting detail than necessary.(yes, I know your love of words and adjectives, but use when necessary-like an important part or something that plays a bigger role in your story)
YAY! :DAuthor's Response: :P
Thanks so much for the review! Yeah, I was always a bit uneasy about the intro to this one - but everytime I went back to fix it and make it less adjective-ish, I always stopped, beacuse I didn't want to ruin it.
Thanks :) Report Review
Wow, this is probably one of the best Luna Lovegood one-shots/short stories that I have ever read. You were imaginative, went off of the info from the books, and pulled it all together in a few paragraphs that left the reader feeling quite satisfied. I really liked your descriptions and insertions of those 'other creatures' that Luna is so well-known for, because they made the tone a little lighter than it would have been otherwise.
The whole idea of Luna questioning herself is much different that the Luna that we know from the books/movies, but considering the circumstances, is entirely plausible. Either way, you really pulled it off. Nice work!Author's Response: I'm glad you liked my story;
I worked hard to integrate the proper feelings and emotions that would make sense with a character like Luna. Thanks so much for your review, and wonderful insight! Report Review
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